- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.
Battle of Agamar (Clone Wars)
- Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 17:17, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Another obscure Clone Wars battle :P
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Luca
- "which forced the Republic's Grand Army to execute the Jedi Order" you can't really kill the Jedi Order, more like the Jedi Order members.
- The infobox says "c. 19 BBY" while the body "by 19 BBY," which is it?
- "before being discovered" being discovered by whom?
- I think you should specify that they remained there "for seventeen years, until 2 BBY."
- Please, make sure to be ok with this copy-edit. LucaRoR
(Talk) 19:15, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
Silver
- Just going to pile on to Luca's one objection about who exactly discovered Kalani and co. by saying there should really be a link to the mission to Agamar (2 BBY). SilverSunbird (talk) 19:32, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
- An objection regarding a single link, especially when I've been doing nominations for over a year, is a sofixit. Regardless, the page needed to be expanded per a mistake with the word count, so it will be going to the GAN when I get a slot open. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 02:17, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- OK then. I'll have another look when it gets there. SilverSunbird (talk) 02:18, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- An objection regarding a single link, especially when I've been doing nominations for over a year, is a sofixit. Regardless, the page needed to be expanded per a mistake with the word count, so it will be going to the GAN when I get a slot open. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 02:17, 27 February 2022 (UTC)