Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Battle between a Republic and Separatist fleet

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Battle between a Republic and Separatist fleet

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 04:10, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I'd like some more info on this. Unfortunately, this is all we have
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

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Support

  1. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 20:13, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
  2. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:50, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
  3. VergenceScatter (talk) 17:40, 13 October 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote OOM 224 14:15, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:50, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Editoronthewiki
  • Note that B1s served aboard the bridge of Grievous's ship
    • Wouldn't exactly call them additional forces unless they boarded one of the Venators, since we don't list them in most of the Malevolence Campaign pages.
  • Don't need to mention attack on Coruscant in body Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:24, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
  • While space is vast, can we say it occurred in open space rather than above/near an astronomical object? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:27, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
    • I think it's fine the way it is, since it already says it took place in space. Nowhere in the page does it mention a planet or astronomical object.
      • Yeah, ok Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:50, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
  • "by the Kaleesh Supreme Commander, General Grievous" Can this be rephrased, placement of Kaleesh here could imply GG was supreme commander of the Kaleesh, rather than GG is Kaleesh. I'm not convinced Kaleesh is even needed here, since at this stage GG is more machine than kaleesh. Kaleesh. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:27, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
    • I'm going to leave Kaleesh in since I do this with all my articles that have to do with Grievous, per Grievous's frigate, Vassek and Vassek system, but I have added "Separatist" in between Kaleesh and Supreme Commander. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 22:39, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Awesome :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:50, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Do the date refs still hold up after my edits? OOM 224 12:02, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
    • Yeah, that's fine. A lot better than what I had :P Erebus Chronus (Talk) 14:06, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Other objections handled via Discord OOM 224 14:15, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:50, 15 October 2021 (UTC)