Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Barracks D5

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Barracks D5

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:37, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Uhhh.....

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Nice. I never would have thought to do this.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:14, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
2. Randomly good. ~Savage 16:59, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
3. NaruHina ^Talk 23:09, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

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1. Bob
   • You need to clarify that the barracks, not Kamino, was built by the Empire.
     • Fixed.
   • The antecedent of "his squad" is not clear; is it the stormtrooper or Vader or Malek?
     • Done.
   • The stormtrooper who spots him probably deserves a unique article, not a generic link to stormtrooper.
     • I have to differ on this. I would say no, since it's not really a unique stormtrooper that says it. Just any random one. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:50, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
       • I'm still not following. Do you mean that in the game, the stormtrooper who spots him is different each time you play? ~Savage 12:26, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
         • In the game, you don't actually see the stormtrooper saying it, you hear him saying it. So, it doesn't actually mean that it's the same trooper. It might be a different trooper every time. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 12:56, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
           • Is that part of normal gameplay or a cutscene? ~Savage 13:13, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
             • Normal gameplay. You're just walking around and suddenly one of the troopers shouts the quote. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 13:07, September 1, 2011 (UTC)
               • OK, I think I finally understand. Forgive my dimness! :) In that case, maybe add a single line to BTS that says something like, "The stormtrooper who spots Starkiller and notifies his squad varies each time the game is played." Or something to that effect? ~Savage 12:40, September 6, 2011 (UTC)
                 • Randomizers can be tricky sometimes. :) Anyway, see how that looks. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:40, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

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