Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Band Light

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Band Light

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Finally doing the nom I was building up to.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
2. NaruHina ^Talk 18:24, September 30, 2011 (UTC)
3. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 09:15, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • Does it say that the ship has a crew of four, or does it just mention four people on the ship and not mention whether there were more crew members or not? If it is the former, please say "At least four" in the infobox. Either way mention the crew in the main article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
     • "Good catch" as you say. :p Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
   • See my objection about the era in the nomination for the captain.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:56, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
     • Done. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)
2. Rubedo
   • Could you explicitly say that Red, Pend, and Nex were crewmembers in the prose? Right now it reads like the former two have no context. A list after saying "at least four" would suffice. NaruHina ^Talk 19:11, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
     • Fixed.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:50, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• You forgot the era tag.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
  • Got it.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:16, October 11, 2011 (UTC)