Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Balazausa

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Balazausa

• Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 23:51, March 10, 2015 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:16, March 15, 2015 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 17:41, March 21, 2015 (UTC)
3. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:06, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:09, April 18, 2015 (UTC)
5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

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501st

• Your reference 2 doesn't need the "on Wizards.com part" and the back up link thing.
  • That's automatically generated from the WizardsCite template. Manoof (talk) 06:02, March 20, 2015 (UTC)
    • Then don't use it there. You don't need the wizards icon in front of it for the note. 501st dogma^(talk) 16:46, March 20, 2015 (UTC)
      • Cite template removed Manoof (talk) 20:59, March 20, 2015 (UTC)
• I don't think being a covert contact necessitates the criminal category. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:49, March 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • I disagree, as a covert contact for Niik, she is part of his criminal empire, and so a criminal. Whatever activities she does for him, they are most definitely illegal. Manoof (talk) 06:02, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• From the Bank of Aargau article, it seems that the Bank of Aargau was not just on the planet Aargau. Unless the article states that she was located on Aargau, you should be careful not to state this, as he could have contacts in the bank who work off-planet. I'd change it to say something like "the Bank of Aargau, which was headquartered on the planet Aargau." This way the article doesn't assume anything. I'm not sure if the article in question states this, so you might need to check the other articles.
  • The introduction page suggests the content of the 5-part series is all on Aargau, this is reinforce on the page itself, which suggests the RPG information included are for a campaign or scenario on the planet. From those facts, I think it's safe to say she is on Aargau. Manoof (talk) 04:15, March 24, 2015 (UTC)
    • Okay, then I would suggest creating a special reference explaining this.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:25, March 30, 2015 (UTC)
      • How's that? Manoof (talk) 00:38, March 31, 2015 (UTC)
        • "Aargau: For All Your Banking Needs suggests the events in the article series takes place on Aargau." This part makes it sound like nothing in the series is explicitly confirmed to take place on Aargau and kind of undermines the reference. The way the reference is currently worded does not really support your claim.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:09, April 11, 2015 (UTC)
          • Alright, I've reworded, including a quote from the source, and I think I've fixed it. Manoof (talk) 23:09, April 11, 2015 (UTC)
            • Looking at the source, the only mention of New Escrow Starport involves asking around in spacer cantinas. I seriously doubt this has much relevance to Balazausa, who is a bureaucrat with a bank.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:01, April 18, 2015 (UTC)
              • Alright just changed to your original suggestion. Manoof (talk) 22:08, April 18, 2015 (UTC)
• Please link Niik's organization in the body somewhere.
  • Done. Manoof (talk) 04:15, March 24, 2015 (UTC)
• For the date, I would just say "around 3 ABY." Having both dates in this case is redundant.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:02, March 24, 2015 (UTC)
  • Removed Manoof (talk) 04:15, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

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