Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Aubin Kleej's mother (second nomination)

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Aubin Kleej's mother

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 00:56, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Felt it was redundant to list the 'dead by' year in the infobox since she's dead by the first and only quote (and her only mention overall), which is kinda a given. FCA, issues from probation page solved.
• Date Archived: 09:24, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 175 words (0 introduction, 137 body, 38 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICSWP:KOTORWP:WOMEN

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 01:11, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:21, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:23, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil

• I'm not familiar with the overall story, but I think there might be several referencing issues here. As far as I can see, the Crucible is not mentioned by name in #40. Likewise, I don't see any mention of Goethar's horns in #46, Chantique is only identified as Goethar's torturer.
• Unless it's the predominant capitalization in other sources, "the" Crucible shouldn't be capitalized per #46's opening text. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:07, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed both. I still slightly disagree with the double-referencing—sometimes we can duck test more of the major affiliations without their full name being depicted, helping less reference clutter—but that's more of a personal preference.—spookywilloww^talk 03:06, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

CC-8

• I don't think the first sentence makes it totally clear that Goethar was Aubin's partner, could do with some rewording. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:30, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Tweaked.—spookywilloww^talk 01:41, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
• I don't think redundancy is a good reason not to include the approximate death date in the infobox. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:36, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
  • I should clarify: we don't have an approximate death date, just that she died at an undetermined point in time prior to her only mention of being dead.—spookywilloww^talk 01:41, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    • So it could say By or in approximately 3963 BBY Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:23, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
      • Added; I do still disagree with it's addition as it's done differently on other passed articles, but not worth holding it up for. Left it at simply by c. to reduce infobox word bloat.—spookywilloww^talk 04:22, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:23, 25 October 2023 (UTC)