Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Attack on the Tangrene system

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Attack on the Tangrene system

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:01, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The end of the first of many branches of the war.

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. I like to think the Tangrenese kicked some Vong butt before rolling over. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:37, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:22, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
3. Supreme Emperor (talk) 21:50, November 11, 2013 (UTC)
4. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:41, November 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. A Force User
   • I'm not sure I understand this objection. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
     • Er, that's not an objection. That's my title. Or should I have said "Master of the Universe"? :P Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:24, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
       • Oh the fact it was numbered threw me off XD woops. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:45, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
2. A Lot of repetition in the body sentence. Please cut it down.
   • Removed some of the repetition. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
     • Great, thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:24, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
3. Context on hyperlane (even if just mentioning that it's nearby. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:53, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
   • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:16, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
4. Maybe this is nitpicking, but I presume the battle was not a year long. Instead, could you say "at one point between 26-26 ABY" or some such? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:24, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
   • Sure thing. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:45, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
5. A Non-Force User
   • I think the Yuuzhan Vong war should be mentioned by name in the body, not pipelinked to.
   • 501st dogma^(talk) 20:58, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
     • Changed Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:30, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
       • How about some context on it? 501st dogma^(talk) 22:00, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
         • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
           • Try to change it up a bit. The multiple commas make it seem awkward. 501st dogma^(talk) 12:26, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
           • I think it looks a bit better now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:49, October 27, 2013 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi
   • It would be better if the second sentence did not use the word "attack" twice.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:14, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
     • Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:35, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
7. SE
   • Same as the Vandyne nom, if you don't mind. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:22, October 18, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done, but again changed slightly. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:35, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

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