Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Attack on the Circumtore system

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Attack on the Circumtore system

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, April 26, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Another bright yellow dot

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:18, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:02, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
3. Winterz (talk) 22:16, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • Shouldn't you take care of the merge and decide which name to have the article at?
     • Merge is sorted thanks to Cade. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:37, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
   • You use variants of travel in two consecutive sentences. Could you use a synonym for one of them?
     • Changed the second travelled to advanced. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:37, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
   • "No information is given about the outcome of the attack although a separate map shows Hollastin was under Vong control by 27 ABY." Don't you mean to say that Circumtore was under Vong control?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:37, April 27, 2013 (UTC)
     • Ah whoops indeed I do. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:37, April 28, 2013 (UTC)
2. 501st
   • Same objection about blurriness as above. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:11, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
     • Shrunk to 150px Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:58, April 29, 2013 (UTC)

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