- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Atomic blast on Raspar-6
- Nominated by: Stake black msg 17:37, February 3, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: That's all there is to it, really.
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Support
- Did a copy-edit. Trak Nar Ramble on 05:35, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
501st dogma(talk) 22:17, February 9, 2013 (UTC)- Winterz (talk) 16:56, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
- I should get that book :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:20, February 16, 2013 (UTC)
Object
- 501st
Would a conjecture tag be in order?- Trak handled that for me, thanks.
- Actually, thinking about it, the source explicitly calls it "the atomic blast on Raspar-6". Are you sure it needs the tag? Stake black msg 21:22, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
- Popping my head in: If it ain't a conjectural name, be sure to use the full name as the bolded in-prose title, rather than "a large-scale atomic blast..." Menkooroo (talk) 13:31, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Stake black msg 13:37, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
- Popping my head in: If it ain't a conjectural name, be sure to use the full name as the bolded in-prose title, rather than "a large-scale atomic blast..." Menkooroo (talk) 13:31, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
- Actually, thinking about it, the source explicitly calls it "the atomic blast on Raspar-6". Are you sure it needs the tag? Stake black msg 21:22, February 9, 2013 (UTC)
- Trak handled that for me, thanks.
How about saying that the blast happened in the Outer Rim, because that's were the sector it's in is located.501st dogma(talk) 01:04, February 5, 2013 (UTC)- I said it happened in the Tragan Cluster, which is in the Outer Rim. Would you rather have me replace Tragan Cluster with Outer Rim? Stake black msg 14:55, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
- You could establish that the cluster is in the Outer Rim to add more context, or you could leave it as is. Your choice. 501st dogma(talk) 21:44, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
- How is it now? Stake black msg 21:55, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
- Was the moon mentioned in the Atlas companian as being in the tragen cluster? If not, you can't source to the atlas for that part, as you are doing now. 501st dogma(talk) 13:29, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
- The moon's system was. Stake black msg 18:13, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
- Was the moon mentioned in the Atlas companian as being in the tragen cluster? If not, you can't source to the atlas for that part, as you are doing now. 501st dogma(talk) 13:29, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
- How is it now? Stake black msg 21:55, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
- You could establish that the cluster is in the Outer Rim to add more context, or you could leave it as is. Your choice. 501st dogma(talk) 21:44, February 7, 2013 (UTC)
- I said it happened in the Tragan Cluster, which is in the Outer Rim. Would you rather have me replace Tragan Cluster with Outer Rim? Stake black msg 14:55, February 6, 2013 (UTC)
This article warrants an infobox (Event's). And context on Dust farmers.Winterz (talk) 14:26, February 13, 2013 (UTC)- How's that now? Stake black msg 16:46, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
- I cannot give further context on "Stolivea" or "talking fogs" because the author never really says what those things are. Stake black msg 14:53, February 4, 2013 (UTC)
- Some clarification was given in this SH thread: Forum:SH:Monsters and Incomprehensible Gibberish from George Lucas. Stake black msg 16:30, February 7, 2013 (UTC)