Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Asth-korr

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Asth-korr

• Nominated by: 501st dogma^(talk) 11:27, April 27, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A random martial arts move that should be used against whoever thought up this Legends thing. :P

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:25, April 27, 2014 (UTC)
2. I'm actually glad that the Yuuzhan Vong aren't canon anymore, but why did everything else have to go with it? Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 09:19, April 28, 2014 (UTC)

   Hey, even though they were sadistic torturers, they were cool bros. :P 501st dogma^(talk) 11:42, April 28, 2014 (UTC)

   Killing Chewie isn't cool! Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 06:33, April 29, 2014 (UTC)

3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:10, April 30, 2014 (UTC)
4. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:19, May 10, 2014 (UTC)
5. For the EU!!! Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:48, May 13, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• in an attempt by their shapers to convert her: Convert her to what?
  • There.
• a battle between the Yuuzhan Vong and the Galactic Alliance at the planet of Caluula: Nitpicky, but isn't the battle also on the space station?
  • That's why I said "at." There is fighting going on on the surface, and at the station. That's why "at" is better than "on" in this case.
    • In the Caluula system would possibly be a little bit more precise. But I'm fine with your explanation.
• If you mention the release date of Force Heretic, please do the same for Unifying Force.
  • Zoop.
• I totally agree. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:57, April 27, 2014 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• You might use the Tactics infobox, Darth Desolous's martial art uses it.
  • Think I filled out the necessary fields.
• You use the word move three times, could you vary your word choice?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:00, April 29, 2014 (UTC)
  • I cut two moves out. Does that help at all? Thanks for the review. 501st dogma^(talk) 11:19, April 29, 2014 (UTC)

SE

• Can you start the first sentence with something other than An? As is, it seems like it refers to Asth-korr as an object rather than a move. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:46, May 12, 2014 (UTC)
  • There you go. 501st dogma^(talk) 16:30, May 12, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

• No clue what infobox should be used.
• Not sure if its okay to use an era template. 501st dogma^(talk) 11:27, April 27, 2014 (UTC)