Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Aramb

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Aramb

• Nominated by: Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 21:55, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part 3 of 3.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:20, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
2. Aramb bunctious fellow! Menkooroo 14:39, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
3. ~ SavageBob 15:44, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
4. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 19:08, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
5. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 19:56, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Aye aye aye
   • It's not clear what Gorog assassins are --- the Dark Nest is mentioned earlier in the article, but "Gorog" is not.
   • The bit about Yuul's promotion isn't really relevant to Aramb. Unless it can be trimmed down and reworded to be similar to how it's presented in Reo's article. Menkooroo 14:21, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
     • Try now. Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 15:03, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
       • "Gorog" is still used twice without any indication of what it means. Can you pick one and stick with it? Menkooroo 03:40, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
         • Should be fixed now. Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 12:40, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
2. Prepare to be savaged...
   • I think we're supposed to used the basic "Quote" template for two speakers, not the one you've got in there now. ~ SavageBob 15:19, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
     • Is there special syntax for using it with two speakers? I can't find anything about it on the Template:Quote page. Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 15:29, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
       • Never mind, got it. Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 16:38, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
3. Cav:
   • A little context on why the Killiks were attacking the Admiral Ackbar would be appreciated.
   • What was the resolution to the attack? A little info there is also needed for closure. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:10, September 7, 2010 (UTC)
     • Both done. Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 14:13, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

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