Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Aquila Squad

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Aquila Squad

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 23:53, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Under twenty CANs? Unacceptable!

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 05:14, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:14, April 10, 2014 (UTC)
3. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:55, April 11, 2014 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:17, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
5. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:46, April 13, 2014 (UTC)

Object

501st

• You need to link to Coruscant. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:21, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:27, April 7, 2014 (UTC)
    • I'd rather that you said out right that the Republic capital world was Coruscant. You aren't doing that currently. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:13, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
      • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:29, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
• The two articles (Manka and Aquila) are almost identical now. It would be nice if you varied the wording. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:45, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:53, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
• If you cant say for certain that they didn't get deployed on the CSF assault ships, than you cant say that they assisted in maintaining order. It would be better if you said that they were scheduled to be deployed to help the CSF. This goes for the other squad too. 501st dogma^(talk) 19:26, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:05, April 9, 2014 (UTC)

SE

• Can we get some context on the Clone Wars? Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:06, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:29, April 8, 2014 (UTC)

Master of the universe

• The article needs a tad bit of context for the Coruscant battle and for "fellow squads". Are the latter commandos as well?
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:29, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
• Please add a sentence to the 2nd ref explaining that the ERC places the Coruscant battle in that year, for this and Manka. Otherwise, it seems to be missing context. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:05, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • I don't see a reason to change the current reference. What is wrong with it? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:29, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
• Lastly, please add that they were aboard CSF assault ships. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:05, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • We only know they were scheduled to do so, not that they did. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:29, April 8, 2014 (UTC)

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