Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Anti-Alien League

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Anti-Alien League

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 17:39, January 24, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Menkooroo 17:22, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Holocron Greatholocron (Complain) 21:32, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ECvote --Eyrezer 10:24, February 21, 2011 (UTC)
    Krzyjstr13 19:34, February 21, 2011 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Not enough main namespace edits. -- NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 20:38, February 21, 2011 (UTC))
  5. GTQ3:09, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  1. Menkooroo
    • Gorton Colu has a CSWE entry and is mentioned in the KOTOR Strategy Guide --- do you know if either of those sources mention the Anti-alien league?
      • Nope, no mention in the CSWE.
        • Strategy Guide? SoresuMakashi might be able to help you out; he GA'd Colu.
          • I'll see if he can help. Darth Karikawill destroy your planet! 15:09, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
            • Awesome! Let me know when you find out whether or not the league is mentioned (directly or indirectly) in the strategy guide.Menkooroo 04:45, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
              • No mention in the guide. Darth Karikawill destroy your planet! 17:02, February 13, 2011 (UTC)
                • Thanks for checking that out. I saw some of the inquiries you made on various talk pages --- good hustle! Menkooroo 17:22, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
    • "The Anti-Alien League was a Humanocentrist group formed by Gorton Colu" is currently sourced to The Essential Atlas.
      • Resourced.
    • I could and should fix this one myself, but it'll be handy for you to know if you don't already: Only use punctuation in image captions if it's a complete sentence. Menkooroo 02:43, January 12, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Rubefacient
    • Context of Taris's multiple cities should be added.
      • Done.
        • Mention that aliens were prohibited from UpCity under normal conditions. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 02:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
          • Done.
    • There needs to be a year in the intro
      • Try now.
        • I'm sorry, I was confused by the banner. Because of that banner, I think this should be made with a History section to avoid the dissonance caused by it. I'll not force you to, but it would probably be beneficial. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 02:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
          • I've moved the image over. Does this help?
    • You say the league was mentioned in the game in the body but say it appeared in the BTS.
      • Corrected.
    • Because the article assumes 100% completion, you do not need the clause saying he could be avoided. That is, unless you include the alternate dialogue tracks (which you should).
      • Alternate dialogue tracks? There are no others that mention the League. Darth Karikawill destroy your planet! 15:09, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
        • Revan can ignore the man, can agree with his speciesism, or tell him to screw off. Which of these elicits the mention? If it is the lattermost, remove the portion saying that Colu mentioned it to Revan and say that he could mention it to Revan given the proper dialogue in the BTS. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 02:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
    • Speciesism FTW NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 05:17, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
  3. SavageBob
    • I think the article should go into more detail about the player's potential conversations with Colu, The player can agree with him or refute him, if I remember correctly, and the reactions of the side characters (the Wookiee and the Twi'lek) change as well. This should probably all be mentioned in BTS. ~ SavageBob 06:24, February 11, 2011 (UTC)
      • While that might work in Colu's article, in no other place in Colu's dialogue does it even remotely mention the League. Darth Karikawill destroy your planet! 01:12, February 12, 2011 (UTC)
        • Isn't it still pertinent, though, since Colu is out touting the league? ~ SavageBob 16:21, February 12, 2011 (UTC)
          • Okay, try now. Darth Karikawill destroy your planet! 19:21, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
            • I think that should be in the BTS; the party doesn't have to include Zaalbar or Mission at that point. Instead, I think you should mention that "If the party includes Mission or Zaalbar, they react to his anti-alien rant by blah blah blah" and/or "Colu reacts to the Wookiee and Twi'lek by saying blah blah blah." ~ SavageBob 19:40, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
              • Try now. Darth Karikawill destroy your planet! 20:00, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
                • Sorry to keep harping on this, but it goes beyond even that. If either the Wookiee or the Twi'lek is in the party, Colu does chide Revan. But there are further levels of interaction depending on whether Revan agrees or disagrees with Colu's rant. If you have the game saved near hear, play through with the two in your party and you'll see what I mean. If not, try to find the dialogue files or a video walkthrough. ~ SavageBob 20:27, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Sanjuro
    • Please add Ref tags to the Bts. <ref name="kotor"/> will work fine. SinisterSamurai 21:51, March 10, 2011 (UTC)
    • "Colu will chide Revan because of neither Zaalbar nor Vao being human," seems weird to me. Maybe change it to "Colu will chide Revan because neither Zaalbar nor Vao are human." (It's OK for the Bts to be present tense, but you can use "were" instead of "are".) SinisterSamurai 21:51, March 10, 2011 (UTC)
      • <grammarnerd>Actually, neither is a singular pronoun, so either was or is would be appropriate. :)</grammarnerd>~ SavageBob 22:16, March 10, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Jujiggum

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