Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Anj'a

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Anj'a

• Nominated by: OLIOSTER ^(talk) 04:34, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Sy Snootles, eat your heart out. ~ SavageBob 21:39, December 18, 2010 (UTC)
2. Darth Morrt 01:44, December 24, 2010 (UTC)
3. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:39, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
4. Menkooroo 07:26, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object

• Would it be any idea to turn (First appearance) and (Picture only) into (First pictured) or something like that? 1358 ^(Talk) 17:01, December 31, 2010 (UTC)
  • Done. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 00:11, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
• Looks really good! I'm just wondering if "adorned the screens of every HoloNet in the galaxy" is correctly-phrased. I think it would be like saying that somebody in real life adorned the screens of every internet in the world. Would it maybe be better to say something like "adorned the screens of every HoloNet user's computer" or something? Menkooroo 05:04, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
  • This is verbatim from the source, should I still change it? OLIOSTER ^(talk) 16:16, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
    • Yeah, I say go for it. Considering that there's only one HoloNet, I think it's safe to assume the source made a mistake. Menkooroo 03:13, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
      • Done. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 01:35, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• I think I've got everything worked out now. The artwork appeared first in Threat of the Conqueror but without any description. A few days later it was added to Star Wars Galaxies as a painting with a description about Anj'a. OLIOSTER ^(talk) 06:02, December 4, 2010 (UTC)