Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Alaspin wine

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Alaspin wine

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:32, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Given that alcohol is technically a poison, isn't all wine faintly poisonous?
• Date Archived: 00:06, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 45 words (0 introduction, 21 body, 24 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 43 words (0 introduction, 19 body, 24 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. POISON OOM 224 (he/him) 23:35, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
2. Wok142 (talk) 00:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 00:57, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 02:38, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• I think an infobox could be added Lewisr (talk) 00:32, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Ha, given how short these articles are I had just defaulted to assuming there wasn't enough for one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
• Some minor context for what Alaspin is could be added Lewisr (talk) 00:32, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Saying that Alaspin was a location seems redundant to the phrase "from Alaspin" being used, which I'd argue tells the reader it's a location. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
    • It could also come from a company/business, so I think it helps to be a little more specific Lewisr (talk) 00:47, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
      • Fair enough, done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:03, 27 March 2024 (UTC)