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Alaspin wine
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:32, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Given that alcohol is technically a poison, isn't all wine faintly poisonous?
- Date Archived: 00:06, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 45 words (0 introduction, 21 body, 24 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 43 words (0 introduction, 19 body, 24 behind the scenes)
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Support
POISON OOM 224 (he/him) 23:35, 24 March 2024 (UTC)- Wok142 (talk) 00:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 00:57, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 02:38, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
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Lew
I think an infobox could be addedLewisr (talk) 00:32, 25 March 2024 (UTC)- Ha, given how short these articles are I had just defaulted to assuming there wasn't enough for one. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Some minor context for what Alaspin is could be addedLewisr (talk) 00:32, 25 March 2024 (UTC)- Saying that Alaspin was a location seems redundant to the phrase "from Alaspin" being used, which I'd argue tells the reader it's a location. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- It could also come from a company/business, so I think it helps to be a little more specific Lewisr (talk) 00:47, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- Fair enough, done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- It could also come from a company/business, so I think it helps to be a little more specific Lewisr (talk) 00:47, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- Saying that Alaspin was a location seems redundant to the phrase "from Alaspin" being used, which I'd argue tells the reader it's a location. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:03, 27 March 2024 (UTC)