Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Aiwha-3 Squad

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Aiwha-3 Squad

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:32, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: There is absolutely no source that states the squad still existed at the end of the Clone Wars. Jez could have been part of another unit for the rest of the war.

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:03, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
2. Manoof (talk) 11:00, March 18, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Manoof

• Again, color. Manoof (talk) 02:44, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • Again, above. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:39, March 17, 2014 (UTC)

SE

• Curious, does the novel state the squad was disbanded? Or is it just left up in the air?
  • Left it up in the air. Jez survived till the end of the war, but it is very clear (said in the novel before) that surviving members were put in in other squads. It is safe to say per novel and CSWE that the squad was disbanded. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:57, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
• Context on the Nulls?
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:57, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
• Can you add the release month to the bts as well?
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:57, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
• Also, please make sure to watch out for redirects in your nominationsSupreme Emperor (talk) 01:38, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
  • Noted, these will disappear. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:57, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
• Can you reword the second sentence a bit? Saying born and created seems a bit redundant, mind just using created?
  • Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:38, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
• Can you add a bit about the brief mention in the CSWE to the bts? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:46, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:38, March 24, 2014 (UTC)

501

• First of all, it needs an intro, as it is at 211 words at my count. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:51, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • Over 250 now, I'll archive it later and take it to the GAN. Unless you have anything else, of course. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 00:58, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
• Looking at it, this sentence seems a bit off: "...was able to resolve the situation peacefully, but was heartbroken about the casualties sustained by Aiwha-3 and other squads." This is because it ties the casualties to the situation with the Nulls, even though that is not the case. That's it. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:35, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added something to avoid confusion. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 01:38, March 25, 2014 (UTC)

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