Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/85th

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85th

• Nominated by: Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:20, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:30, August 25, 2019 (UTC)
2. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:36, August 26, 2019 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 13:59, August 26, 2019 (UTC)
4. Zed42 (talk) 18:28, August 26, 2019 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:48, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• In the last sentence of the body, I don't think it needs to be said that the Lieutenant Commander is in Squadron Five. They've been established as a unit twice before in the article; I think "the squadron's" or "squadron member" or similar would suffice. Fan26 (Talk) 00:46, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • I replaced with squad leader, is that alright?--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:49, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
    • Yes, that's perfect. Fan26 (Talk) 00:54, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Again regarding the last sentence; I'm assuming Broosh voiced their opinion. This should be edited to reflect that-right now it's unclear as to whether they said this or thought this. Fan26 (Talk) 00:54, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • How is it now?--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:55, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
    • Actually, I'm now questioning the need to have a bit devoted to someone's opinion on the pilots in an article about the unit they were presumed to be a part of. Perhaps this should be removed. Fan26 (Talk) 00:59, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
      • Removed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:01, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Zed

• I think these events can be given a fairly solid date. As issue #5 reveals that the mission which the cadets were transferred for happens concurrently to the Battle of Endor, it can be placed in 4 ABY. Zed42 (talk) 01:08, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • Added with reference note--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:43, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Articles that first appeared in comics require the full date of release rather than just the year.
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:43, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Also, I'm not sure whether mentioning the letterer is necessary. I haven't seen it done before with status articles. Zed42 (talk) 01:12, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • Removed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:43, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Anil

• In the last sentence, I think you should add that Brebtin's guess was wrong, as the two were just cadets. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:52, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:43, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:54, August 28, 2019 (UTC)