Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/43rd Battalion

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

43rd Battalion

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:38, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Non-TCW clones!

(0 ECs/2 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. --Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 17:37, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
2. Tinwe^(comlink) 07:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Tinwe
   • I think there are various little pieces of information from CSWE (maybe they are mentioned in the HNN as well, dunno) that could be added, such as the initial Republic attack being three-pronged, as there were three Separatist holdings they aimed to capture. The fact that this left the Shelter Base relatively undefended should also be mentioned.
     • Added the stuff. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
   • In the Bts, it could be mentioned that the HoloNet News issue was written by Pablo Hidalgo, and that the Jabiim news tied into the then-ongoing Republic "Battle of Jabiim" comic arc. Also, in-universe should be linked.
     • Adressed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
   • Otherwise, very nice job. :) Tinwe^(comlink) 20:26, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
2. The aricle currently stands at 211 words. Can you please provide a revision that includes a body and an intro see if it goes above 250 words? 1358 ^(Talk) 11:08, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
   • You guys like to give me more and more GANs. I'll have no knowledge about unit articles and therefore require some help. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:13, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
     • Maybe Wookieepedia:Good articles#Organizations can help. 1358 ^(Talk) 11:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
       • Yup. Could you please see if it is over 250 words? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:20, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
         • 265, says my word processor. Sorry Lee, you'll have to GAN them. :) Tinwe^(comlink) 16:02, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Could someone please archieve the nom? Thanks a lot. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:19, December 6, 2011 (UTC)