[19:02]OOM: cool [19:02]OOM: our notes [19:02]OOM: Shayanomer Extend Silver Sea, kill the rest. Probe all new. Vote goes to meeting host. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:06, 29 October 2022 (UTC) CC-8 Notes per Shay, votes to second attendee Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC) Imp Per CC. Imperators II(Talk) 14:23, 13 November 2022 (UTC) [19:02]OOM: old stuff [19:02]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Market_Street_(Taris)?oldid=11735664&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Market_Street_(Taris) no change, kill [19:02]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:02]OOM: Market Street (Taris) killed [19:02]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Advanced_Recon_Commando_(intelligence_officer)?oldid=11735668&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Unidentified_Advanced_Recon_Commando_(intelligence_officer) no change, kill [19:02]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:02]OOM: Unidentified Advanced Recon Commando (intelligence officer) killed [19:02]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Zephata%27ru%27tor?oldid=11735670&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Zephata%27ru%27tor no change, kill [19:02]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:02]OOM: Zephata'ru'tor killed [19:03]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sev%27s_ARC_trooper?oldid=11735671&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Sev%27s_ARC_trooper no change, kill [19:03]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:03]OOM: Sev's ARC trooper killed [19:03]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rings_of_Coruscant?oldid=11735675&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Rings_of_Coruscant no relevant changes, kill [19:03]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:03]OOM: Rings of Coruscant killed [19:03]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Nub/Legends?oldid=11735678&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Nub/Legends no change, kill [19:03]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:03]OOM: Nub/Legends killed [19:03]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Umaren%27k%27sa?oldid=11735680&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Umaren%27k%27sa no change, kill [19:03]Ayrehead02: Kil [19:03]OOM: Umaren'k'sa killed [19:03]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Eekar_Oki/Legends?oldid=11735683&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Eekar_Oki/Legends no relevant changes, kill [19:03]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:03]OOM: Eekar Oki/Legends killed [19:03]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Assault_on_an_Imperial_outpost?oldid=11735709&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Assault_on_an_Imperial_outpost_(second_review) no relevant changes, kill [19:04]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:04]OOM: Assault on an Imperial outpost killed [19:04]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ronto_Wrap?oldid=11735694&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Ronto_Wrap no relevant changes, kill [19:04]Ayrehead02: I think Fred asked for an extension on this [19:04]OOM: ah okay [19:04]OOM: extend then [19:04]Ayrehead02: Extend [19:04]OOM: Ronto Wrap extended [19:04]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Quell_system?oldid=11735696&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Quell_system updated. keep [19:04]Ayrehead02: Keep [19:04]OOM: Quell system kept [19:04]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Silver_Sea?oldid=11735697&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Silver_Sea issues addressed, keep [19:04]Ayrehead02: Keep [19:05]OOM: Silver Sea kept [19:05]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sakas?oldid=11735698&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Sakas no change, kill [19:05]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:05]OOM: Sakas killed [19:05]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Siro?oldid=11735699&diff=cur https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Siro no change, kill [19:05]Ayrehead02: Kill [19:05]OOM: Siro killed [19:05]OOM: awesome, that's all the old [19:05]OOM: now the new [19:05]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jerjerrod_(admiral) [19:05]OOM: Jerjerrod (admiral) — Image tag Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:59, 13 October 2022 (UTC) [19:05]OOM: probe [19:05]Ayrehead02: Probe [19:05]JediMasterMacaroni: probe [19:05]OOM: Jerjerrod probed [19:05]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Izri_DazhIzri Dazh — Image tag Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:59, 13 October 2022 (UTC) [19:05]Ayrehead02: Probe [19:05]OOM: probe [19:05]JediMasterMacaroni: probe [19:06]OOM: Izri Dazh probed [19:06]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Finn_Vaal [19:06]OOM: Finn Vaal — Image tag Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:59, 13 October 2022 (UTC) [19:06]OOM: probe [19:06]JediMasterMacaroni: probe [19:06]Ayrehead02: Probe [19:06]OOM: Finn Vaal probed [19:06]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/43rd_Battalion [19:06]OOM: Article could benefit from a Description section, per there being enough information for one. BTS is missing release date for Star Wars: Republic: The Battle of Jabiim. However, I do not believe the inclusion of the Republic HoloNet News Core Edition 14:9:01 issue being a tie-in is entirely required Mention of it receiving an entry in CSWE is redundant to modern-day status articles. Full release date for the issue mentioned above. The body would benefit from an image of the battle or planet. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 20:11, 18 October 2022 (UTC) Additionally, the second paragraph in History could do with a rewrite. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 20:24, 18 October 2022 (UTC) [19:06]OOM: hefty one, probe [19:06]Ayrehead02: Probe [19:06]JediMasterMacaroni: probe [19:06]OOM: 43rd Battalion probed [19:06]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Blackwater_Systems [19:06]OOM: Sentence flow in Description can be improved. Date needs a note. Would like to see an image in the body. Multiple run-on sentences in the body that need splitting up. CSWECite missing in citation. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:44, 24 October 2022 (UTC) [19:06]OOM: probe [19:06]Ayrehead02: Probe [19:06]JediMasterMacaroni: probe [19:06]OOM: Blackwater Systems probed [19:07]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Maddie_Macatten [19:07]OOM: Personality and traits should be split to have separate sections for Equipment and Skills and abilities. With how much information is noted in the P+T, some of that could be worked into the sparser area of the history to establish that she did all of those things at some point. BtS cites.—spookywillowwtalk 00:10, 27 October 2022 (UTC) [19:07]OOM: probe [19:07]Ayrehead02: Probe [19:07]JediMasterMacaroni: probe [19:07]OOM: Maddie Macatten probed [19:07]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/2163/Legends [19:07]OOM: Would like to see an expansion of the intro a little bit. Body is far too small for an article of this kind of character. I do not believe 2163 being constructed by BCA is citable to the databank entry. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 02:49, 30 October 2022 (UTC) [19:07]Ayrehead02: Probe [19:07]OOM: probe [19:07]JediMasterMacaroni: probe [19:07]OOM: 2163/Legends probed [19:07]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Jedi_(Endar_Spire) [19:07]OOM: Campaign Guide doesn't appear to be a valid source for the date. No image should be pushing the text against the infobox. Would like to see Equipment included. Unsourced BTS. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:58, 12 November 2022 (UTC) [19:07]OOM: probe [19:07]Ayrehead02: Probe [19:07]JediMasterMacaroni: probe [19:07]OOM: Unidentified Jedi (Endar Spire) probed [19:07]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Troukree_(sacrifice) [19:07]OOM: Unidentified Troukree (sacrifice) — After determining that the Troukree was not confirmed to be male as the article claimed, I rewrote the article to reflect that and cleaned some stuff up. Mentioning it here just in case the changes are big enough for a redux. Samonic Signatureicon.png (Talk) 11:09, 13 November 2022 (UTC) [19:08]OOM: what do we think? [19:08]JediMasterMacaroni: I looked at it, I don't think it was that big of a change [19:08]JediMasterMacaroni: I'll check again [19:08]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Troukree_(sacrifice)?type=revision&diff=11821944&oldid=10519505 [19:08]OOM: everything looks fine to me at a glance [19:09]Ayrehead02: Same [19:09]Ayrehead02: Spare [19:09]JediMasterMacaroni: spare [19:09]OOM: spare [19:09]OOM: Unidentified Troukree (sacrifice) spared [19:09]OOM: awesome, that's all the new [19:09]OOM: bin time [19:10]OOM: mostly the usual suspects, but [19:10]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Revolt_aboard_the_Tsam_P%27ah?t=20221112201026 [19:10]OOM: citation tag [19:10]OOM: probe [19:10]JediMasterMacaroni: oh that's easy, I'll do that right now [19:11]Ayrehead02: Spare if JMM's happy to do it [19:11]OOM: I'm fine if you could handle it, sure [19:11]OOM: spare [19:11]JediMasterMacaroni: Spare [19:11]OOM: revolt aboard the Tsam P'ah spared [19:11]OOM: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ephru_Shinn?t=20221023135730 [19:11]OOM: requires a little update from Oct 9 [19:12]JediMasterMacaroni: Yo WHAT [19:12]OOM: think that's one of yours, Macaroni [19:12]JediMasterMacaroni: HYPE [19:12]JediMasterMacaroni: I HAD NO IDEA [19:12]JediMasterMacaroni: PROBE that thang [19:12]Ayrehead02: Probe [19:12]OOM: hahaha love it [19:12]OOM: PROBE [19:12]OOM: Ephru Shinn probed [19:12]OOM: oki, that's all from me! [19:12]OOM: anyone with anything else? [19:12]JediMasterMacaroni: MON CALAMARI JEDIIIIIII [19:12]Ayrehead02: Nope [19:12]JediMasterMacaroni: oh yeah nope [19:12]OOM: heh okay [19:13]OOM: that concludes ACmoot 156 then [19:13]Ayrehead02: Thanks for hosting OOM, [19:13]OOM: @Commander Code-8 is our paperwork boy [19:13]JediMasterMacaroni: thanks OOM [19:13]OOM: thanks all for attending [19:13]OOM: and go Mon Cal Jedi! [19:13]OOM: now for my dinner :P