[8:03 AM] OOM 224: Welcome to AC 147 [8:03 AM] OOM 224: Notes: [8:03 AM] OOM 224: Imp Kill all the old stuff. Spare Misik, WED-15-I662, and Braconnor Bakiska/Legends. Probe the rest of the new stuff. Support new membership, arm Shay with my vote for anything else that comes up. Imperators II(Talk) 23:29, 13 January 2022 (UTC) [8:03 AM] OOM 224: Macaroni Notes per Imp. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:51, 14 January 2022 (UTC) [8:03 AM] OOM 224: Zed Keep Jonas, rescue mission, Bendix, and Halloween. Kill all the other old stuff Spare Misik, WED, and Braconnor. Probe everything else new. Support membership; Fred has my vote for anything else. Zed42 (talk) 10:33, 15 January 2022 (UTC) [8:03 AM] OOM 224: ecks Notes per Imp, Fred gets my vote. 1358 (Talk) 12:03, 15 January 2022 (UTC) [8:03 AM] OOM 224: Ayrehead Kill Darish Vol, Dordi, Jaunty Cavalier, Crakull system, Svekk system, Chorin, Unidentified protoplanetary disk, Gowix Computers Keep Taspan II, Jonas Stern, Packered mortar gun, Rescue mission to Vandos, qaz-class Star Destroyer, Assault on an Imperial outpost, Bendix Fust, Halloween Probe Guanta/Legends, Stormtrooper X, Rebel Crew Chief, Pax Bonkik, Shon Kon Ray, Radank, Malt, Bodo Baas's Master, Qual, Quermia Spare Misik, WED-15-I662, Braconnor Bakiska/Legends Support new membership. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:24, 15 January 2022 (UTC) [8:06 AM] OOM 224: Okay, the old stuff now [8:06 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Darish_Vol [8:06 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160756/cur [8:06 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Darish_Vol [8:07 AM] OOM 224: no change, kill [8:07 AM] Master Fredcerique: kill [8:07 AM] Zed42: Kill [8:07 AM] Shayanomer: kill [8:07 AM] OOM 224: Darish Vol killed [8:07 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Taspan_II [8:07 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160759/cur [8:07 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Taspan_II_(second_review) [8:07 AM] OOM 224: issues all resolved [8:08 AM] OOM 224: keep [8:08 AM] Shayanomer: Keep [8:08 AM] Zed42: Keep [8:08 AM] Master Fredcerique: keep [8:08 AM] OOM 224: Taspan II kept [8:08 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Dordi [8:08 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160764/cur [8:08 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Dordi [8:08 AM] OOM 224: No change, kill [8:08 AM] Master Fredcerique: kill [8:08 AM] Shayanomer: kill [8:08 AM] Zed42: Kill [8:08 AM] OOM 224: Dordi killed [8:09 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jaunty_Cavalier [8:09 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160767/cur [8:09 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Jaunty_Cavalier_(second_review) [8:09 AM] OOM 224: no change [8:09 AM] OOM 224: kill [8:09 AM] Shayanomer: kill [8:09 AM] Master Fredcerique: kill [8:09 AM] Zed42: Kill [8:09 AM] OOM 224: Jaunty Cavalier killed [8:09 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jonas_Stern [8:09 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160771/cur [8:09 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Jonas_Stern [8:09 AM] OOM 224: issues all resolved [8:09 AM] OOM 224: keep [8:09 AM] Shayanomer: keep [8:09 AM] Zed42: Keep [8:10 AM] Master Fredcerique: keep [8:10 AM] OOM 224: Jonas Stern kept [8:10 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Crakull_system [8:10 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160781/cur [8:10 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Crakull_system [8:10 AM] OOM 224: no change, kill [8:10 AM] Master Fredcerique: kill [8:10 AM] Zed42: Kill [8:10 AM] Shayanomer: kill [8:11 AM] OOM 224: Crakull system killed [8:11 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Svekk_system [8:11 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160784/cur [8:11 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Svekk_system [8:11 AM] OOM 224: no change again [8:11 AM] OOM 224: kill [8:11 AM] Master Fredcerique: kill [8:11 AM] Zed42: Kill [8:11 AM] Shayanomer: kill [8:11 AM] OOM 224: Svekk system killed [8:11 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Chorin [8:11 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160789/cur [8:11 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Chorin [8:11 AM] OOM 224: still exceeds word count [8:11 AM] OOM 224: kill [8:11 AM] Zed42: Kill [8:11 AM] Master Fredcerique: kill [8:11 AM] Shayanomer: kill [8:12 AM] OOM 224: Chorin killed [8:12 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Packered_mortar_gun [8:12 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160791/cur [8:12 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Packered_mortar_gun [8:12 AM] OOM 224: issue's been dealt with [8:12 AM] OOM 224: keep [8:13 AM] Shayanomer: keep [8:13 AM] Zed42: Keep [8:13 AM] Master Fredcerique: Should fix the redirect, but keep [8:13 AM] OOM 224: Packered mortar gun kept [8:13 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rescue_mission_to_Vandos [8:13 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160793/cur [8:13 AM] Master Fredcerique: Oh wait it was. Was looking at an old revision [8:13 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Rescue_mission_to_Vandos [8:14 AM] OOM 224: issue's also been dealt with [8:14 AM] OOM 224: keep [8:14 AM] Shayanomer: keep [8:14 AM] Zed42: Keep [8:14 AM] Master Fredcerique: keep [8:14 AM] OOM 224: rescue mission to Vandos kept [8:14 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_protoplanetary_disk [8:14 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160795/cur [8:15 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Unidentified_protoplanetary_disk [8:15 AM] OOM 224: no change [8:15 AM] OOM 224: kill [8:15 AM] Master Fredcerique: kill [8:15 AM] Shayanomer: kill [8:15 AM] Zed42: Kill [8:15 AM] OOM 224: Unidentified protoplanetary disk killed [8:15 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Assault_on_an_Imperial_outpost [8:15 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160797/cur [8:15 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Assault_on_an_Imperial_outpost [8:15 AM] OOM 224: issues all addressed [8:15 AM] OOM 224: keep [8:16 AM] Zed42: Keep [8:16 AM] Shayanomer: keep [8:16 AM] Master Fredcerique: keep [8:16 AM] OOM 224: Assault on an Imperial outpost kept [8:16 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Gowix_Computers [8:16 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160802/cur [8:16 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Gowix_Computers [8:16 AM] OOM 224: no change [8:16 AM] OOM 224: kill [8:16 AM] Shayanomer: kill [8:16 AM] Zed42: Kill [8:17 AM] Master Fredcerique: kill [8:17 AM] OOM 224: Gowix Computers killed [8:17 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Qaz-class_Star_Destroyer [8:17 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160805/cur [8:17 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Qaz-class_Star_Destroyer [8:17 AM] OOM 224: issue already addressed [8:17 AM] OOM 224: keep [8:17 AM] Shayanomer: I just noticed that the introduction year is infobox-exclusive [8:18 AM] Shayanomer: Extend in this case [8:18 AM] Master Fredcerique: Is it? [8:18 AM] Master Fredcerique: Oh [8:19 AM] Shayanomer: Nowhere does the body mention it was introduced at the Empire's beginning [8:19 AM] Master Fredcerique: Yeah, just states "since its beginning." [8:19 AM] OOM 224: Yeah, extend then [8:19 AM] Master Fredcerique: It does, though [8:19 AM] Zed42: It does at the end of the first History paragraph, but that sentence could probably be moved to the start of that [8:19 AM] Shayanomer: Ah missed it [8:20 AM] Master Fredcerique: Yeah, I'd agree it should be moved up. [8:20 AM] Shayanomer: Well there you go it should be moved elsewhere :P [8:20 AM] Master Fredcerique: I'd be willing to move it post meeting tbh [8:20 AM] Master Fredcerique: If we want to just keep [8:20 AM] Zed42: Yeah, if there are no other issues then it's not a big deal to fix [8:21 AM] Shayanomer: Oh and full comic date while we're at it [8:21 AM] Master Fredcerique: Ah shit well that I'm not doing. 😛 [8:21 AM] Master Fredcerique: Extend [8:21 AM] Shayanomer: Extend [8:22 AM] OOM 224: yeah, the formatting for that comic title should be corrected too [8:22 AM] OOM 224: extend [8:22 AM] Zed42: extend [8:22 AM] OOM 224: qaz-class Star Destroyer extended [8:22 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Bendix_Fust [8:22 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160810/cur [8:22 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Bendix_Fust [8:22 AM] OOM 224: issue's been addressed, but the article still has a few issues [8:23 AM] OOM 224: context for the lead quote could be mentioned in the prose, for example [8:23 AM] OOM 224: and there's some redundant BTS info [8:23 AM] OOM 224: Extend [8:23 AM] Shayanomer: Gamer 10 is pre-Bounty Hunter isn't it [8:24 AM] Shayanomer: It is, so that should be mentioned in the article [8:25 AM] Shayanomer: Equipment section missing, infobox-exclusive info [8:25 AM] Zed42: Extend, then [8:25 AM] Shayanomer: extend [8:26 AM] Master Fredcerique: Extend [8:26 AM] OOM 224: Bendix Fust extended [8:26 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Halloween [8:26 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/11160814/cur [8:26 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Halloween_(second_review) [8:26 AM] OOM 224: issue's been resolved [8:26 AM] Master Fredcerique: Good, I was hoping we'd get to keep Halloween. 😛 [8:27 AM] Master Fredcerique: Keep [8:27 AM] Zed42: Keep [8:27 AM] Shayanomer: keep [8:27 AM] OOM 224: Keep [8:27 AM] OOM 224: Halloween kept [8:27 AM] OOM 224: onto the new stuff [8:27 AM] OOM 224: Guanta/Legends — 1,024 words. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 21:08, 26 December 2021 (UTC) [8:27 AM] OOM 224: probe [8:27 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:27 AM] Zed42: Probe [8:27 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:27 AM] OOM 224: Guanta probed [8:27 AM] OOM 224: Stormtrooper X Can use an Equipment section. Body image should probably be removed since it does not depict the subject and would not fit if it was moved next to the BTS anyway. BTS: Missing publication dates. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:31, 30 December 2021 (UTC) [8:28 AM] OOM 224: probe [8:28 AM] Zed42: Probe [8:28 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:28 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:28 AM] OOM 224: Stormtrooper X probed [8:28 AM] OOM 224: Misik Clone according to a TCG card. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:11, 2 January 2022 (UTC) Card game fanmade. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:30, 2 January 2022 (UTC) [8:28 AM] Master Fredcerique: Can we link these? [8:28 AM] OOM 224: sure [8:28 AM] Master Fredcerique: I'd like to see the articles, too. [8:28 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Misik [8:29 AM] OOM 224: Hanzo's struck that issue since the card in question is actually fanmade [8:29 AM] OOM 224: spare [8:29 AM] Shayanomer: spare [8:29 AM] Master Fredcerique: spare [8:29 AM] Zed42: Spare [8:29 AM] OOM 224: Misik spared [8:29 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/WED-15-I662 [8:29 AM] OOM 224: WED-15-I662 Star Wars (1977) 1 is first appearance, so a brief update needed. No new info. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:34, 2 January 2022 (UTC) Fixed by JMM. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:24, 4 January 2022 (UTC) [8:29 AM] OOM 224: spare [8:29 AM] Master Fredcerique: spare [8:30 AM] Zed42: Spare [8:30 AM] Shayanomer: spare [8:30 AM] OOM 224: WED-15-I662 spared [8:30 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rebel_Crew_Chief [8:30 AM] OOM 224: Rebel Crew Chief Behind the scenes not 100% cited. Infobox exclusive information. Not confirmed to be an issue, but see if the adaptations he's listed as appearing in also have any contradictory information. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:48, 2 January 2022 (UTC) Addendum: Star Wars: A New Hope - The Special Edition 3 and Star Wars: The National Public Radio Dramatization do have contradictory lines. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:31, 3 January 2022 (UTC) CCG card doesn't say Incom was a starship company, so that needs to be cited to something else. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:05, 14 January 2022 (UTC) [8:30 AM] OOM 224: probe [8:30 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:30 AM] Master Fredcerique: probe [8:30 AM] Zed42: Probe [8:30 AM] OOM 224: Rebel Crew Chief probed [8:30 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Braconnor_Bakiska/Legends [8:30 AM] OOM 224: Braconnor Bakiska/Legends Hood can be detailed under an Equipment section. Date needs another source. Can use some paragraph breaks. Cantina filming information should be added. BTS image caption should elaborate on why the image is relevant to this article. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:29, 6 January 2022 (UTC) All done. Note that certain paragraphs are only 4-5 sentences even if visually lengthy, so not broken. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:00, 6 January 2022 (UTC) [8:31 AM] OOM 224: Keep [8:31 AM] Shayanomer: spare [8:31 AM] OOM 224: ah [8:31 AM] OOM 224: spare [8:31 AM] Master Fredcerique: spare [8:31 AM] Zed42: Spare [8:31 AM] OOM 224: Braconnor Bakiska/Legends spared [8:31 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Pax_Bonkik [8:31 AM] OOM 224: Pax Bonkik YJCCGlogo.png Young Jedi Collectible Card Game – The Jedi Council (Card: Rodian) shows he's a mercenary, so not sure whether that's conflicting canon with the Databank, or both can be reconciled, but either way, the article needs an update. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:06, 10 January 2022 (UTC) From a quick skim of the Databank entry, certain details in the article itself aren't in the source material. Further checking the CSWE proves the latter source has no new information, so some rewriting needs to be done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:08, 11 January 2022 (UTC) [8:32 AM] OOM 224: Probe [8:32 AM] Zed42: Probe [8:32 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:32 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:32 AM] Master Fredcerique: Sorry [8:32 AM] Master Fredcerique: Dog issues [8:32 AM] OOM 224: Pax Bonkik probed [8:32 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Shon_Kon_Ray [8:32 AM] OOM 224: Shon Kon Ray Here is a confirmation that his name references Sean Connery. First behind the scenes sentence doesn't reference comic he's in. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:57, 14 January 2022 (UTC) [8:33 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:33 AM] OOM 224: that BBY date is infobox-exclusive too, and a few more issues with linking and references [8:33 AM] OOM 224: probe [8:33 AM] Zed42: Probe\ [8:34 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:34 AM] OOM 224: Shon Kon Ray probed [8:34 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Radank [8:34 AM] OOM 224: Radank That image should be enlarged. Dates need notes. Unsourced BTS. Investigate abridged audiobooks for mentions. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:22, 15 January 2022 (UTC) [8:34 AM] OOM 224: probe [8:34 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:34 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:34 AM] Zed42: Probe [8:35 AM] OOM 224: Radank probed [8:35 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Malt [8:35 AM] OOM 224: Malt Dates need notes. Missing a History section, where all the instances of malt appearing should go. Are there more quotes that can be added? BTS: Context needed for A New Hope and Behind the Magic; extraneous information present. Investigate abridged audiobooks for mentions. It sounds like The Star Wars Cookbook II: Darth Malt and More Galactic Recipes should be listed under Sources. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:32, 15 January 2022 (UTC) [8:35 AM] OOM 224: probe [8:35 AM] Zed42: Probe [8:35 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:35 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:35 AM] OOM 224: Malt probed [8:35 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Bodo_Baas%27s_Master [8:35 AM] OOM 224: Bodo Baas's Master Eliminate page and section numbers. Messy presentation; image clashing with template and the body looks like it can barely fit those two images to begin with. Some of those dates aren't sourced properly. BTS: Unsourced and lacking full comic date. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 09:55, 15 January 2022 (UTC) [8:35 AM] OOM 224: probe [8:35 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:36 AM] Zed42: Probe [8:36 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:36 AM] OOM 224: Bodo Baas's Master probed [8:36 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Qual [8:36 AM] OOM 224: Qual Images: Digitize them; speech bubbles shouldn't be blanked out if text is intact. "None" isn't a hair color. Can the comic support those dates? Can use an Equipment section. BTS is missing full comic date. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:04, 15 January 2022 (UTC) [8:37 AM] Zed42: Probe [8:37 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:37 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:37 AM] OOM 224: probe [8:37 AM] OOM 224: Qual probed [8:37 AM] OOM 224: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Quermia [8:37 AM] OOM 224: Quermia — Should note in-universe mention in Galactic Atlas. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:55, 15 January 2022 (UTC) [8:37 AM] OOM 224: probe [8:38 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:38 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:38 AM] Zed42: Probe, again [8:38 AM] OOM 224: Quermia probed again [8:39 AM] OOM 224: okay, that's it for the new stuff. Just one more thing from the bin [8:39 AM] OOM 224: [[Tho'natu]] [8:39 AM] BOT Wiki-Bot: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tho%27natu [8:39 AM] OOM 224: fact tag [8:39 AM] OOM 224: Probe [8:39 AM] Shayanomer: probe [8:39 AM] Master Fredcerique: Probe [8:39 AM] Zed42: Probe [8:39 AM] OOM 224: Tho'natu probed [8:39 AM] OOM 224: Anyone's got anything else? [8:40 AM] Zed42: Nothing from me [8:40 AM] Master Fredcerique: Nada [8:40 AM] Shayanomer: No more [8:40 AM] OOM 224: Great [8:40 AM] OOM 224: Zed's on paperwork this time [8:40 AM] Zed42: damn [8:40 AM] OOM 224: Thanks all for attending