22:10] Commander Code-8: Alright welcome to the 150th AC meeting, I hope you're all prepared for as many Madagascar quotes as I can remember [22:10] Commander Code-8: First up: old things [22:10] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Zeuol [22:11] Commander Code-8: Issues on the review page have all been fixed by Hanzo and notes say keep [22:11] ecks: erm, Hanzo put it on the agenda and then fixed all of it himself? oh well [22:11] Ayrehead02: Keep [22:12] ecks: Keep [22:12] Commander Code-8: Keep [22:12] Commander Code-8: Zeoul kept [22:12] Commander Code-8: Next up: Battle of Sagma [22:12] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_of_Sagma [22:12] Commander Code-8: 158 words in body, sectioning needed [22:12] Commander Code-8: No change to the article [22:13] ecks: Just for the record, I have Fred and JMM's votes, and CC8 has Shay and OOM's votes [22:13] ecks: kill [22:13] Commander Code-8: kill [22:14] ecks: @Ayrehead02 ? [22:14] Ayrehead02: Kill [22:15] Commander Code-8: Sagma killed [22:15] Commander Code-8: I'm disappointed in myself for not finding a juvenile joke there [22:15] ecks: you know I was thinking the exact same thing [22:15] ecks: [Redacted by administration] [22:16] ecks: ba dum tsh [22:16] Commander Code-8: [Redacted by administration] [22:16] ecks: hmm, works for me [22:16] Commander Code-8: Next up: Unidentified Coruscant Police Officer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Unidentified_Coruscant_Police_officer_(Panza_Hondi) [22:16] ecks: no changes, kill [22:16] Commander Code-8: 155 words in body, needs sectioning removed. No change [22:16] Commander Code-8: kill [22:17] Ayrehead02: Kill [22:17] Commander Code-8: Police officer killed [22:17] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Nar_Chan [22:17] Commander Code-8: 155 words in body, needs sectioning removed. No change [22:17] ecks: kill [22:17] Ayrehead02: Kill [22:18] Commander Code-8: Nar Chan killed [22:18] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Republic_Law_44-12 [22:18] Commander Code-8: That second intro paragraph needs about a third taken off at least [22:18] Commander Code-8: Handled by Sooky [22:18] Commander Code-8: *Spooky [22:18] Commander Code-8: Keep [22:18] Ayrehead02: Keep [22:18] ecks: keep [22:18] Commander Code-8: Republic law kept [22:19] Commander Code-8: In the distance Palpatine seethes [22:19] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Alderaan_Ascendancy_Contention [22:19] Commander Code-8: Behind the scenes partially uncited. Pello Scrambas article notes conflicting IU years for the Contention, based on 2 different appearances. Assuming the information's correctly documented in the Scrambas article, the Contention article also needs to note that inconsistency. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:59, 9 March 2022 (UTC) And 1,082 words by my count. [22:19] ecks: get em out of here [22:19] ecks: kill [22:19] Commander Code-8: No changes, kill [22:20] Ayrehead02: Kill [22:20] Commander Code-8: Alderaan Ascendancy killed [22:20] Commander Code-8: Next we have Halurium https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Halurium [22:21] Commander Code-8: 158 words in body, needs sectioning removed [22:21] ecks: more like Bye-lurium [22:21] ecks: kill [22:21] Ayrehead02: Kill [22:21] Commander Code-8: Halurium Byeluriumd [22:22] Commander Code-8: Next https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Spelunker_probe_droid/Legends [22:22] Ayrehead02: You keep forgetting to actually vote kill CC 😛 [22:22] Commander Code-8: Lol I figured its just assumed if I move it forward [22:22] Commander Code-8: Update required, and another source pending investigation. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:06, 9 March 2022 (UTC) A quick check shows behind the scenes not fully cited. 1st sentence should be 2 citations. [22:22] ecks: no changes, kill [22:23] Commander Code-8: kill [22:23] Ayrehead02: Kill [22:23] Commander Code-8: Spelunker killed like my hopes and dreams [22:23] Commander Code-8: Next https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Kusurrun [22:23] Commander Code-8: that NJO Sourcebook reference doesn't really work neither does the double-ref for the date, not at this day and age - it should generally be either clean TERC ref for the date and the novel for the rest, or (most probable in this case) a manual ref note saying "TERC dates the novel[, which includes blahblah,] to date X." and thirdly, listing "frigate" under "Role" when it's already listed and linked in "Class" seems redundant to me and actually also seems like it's not what the role field is for, at least per the template documentation oh, and for anyone reading this later, "the year 28 ABY" is redundant wording, people. "28 ABY" already means "28 years after the Battle of Yavin" [22:24] ecks: no changes, kill [22:24] Commander Code-8: More like Kusu-none [22:24] Commander Code-8: kill [22:24] Ayrehead02: Kill [22:24] Commander Code-8: Kusurrun killed [22:24] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ver%C3%A9 [22:24] Commander Code-8: 152 words in body [22:25] Ayrehead02: Kill [22:25] Commander Code-8: No changes, kill [22:25] ecks: KILL [22:25] ecks: err, that was overly enthusiastic [22:25] ecks: kill [22:25] Commander Code-8: Lol, Vere killed [22:25] Commander Code-8: Finally, last of the old stuff https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_of_Florrum [22:26] Commander Code-8: Concurrent battles and date need notes. Would like to see another image under "The battle." BTS needs more context regarding the comic [22:26] ecks: kill [22:26] Commander Code-8: kill [22:26] Ayrehead02: Kill [22:26] Commander Code-8: Battle of Florrum killed [22:26] Commander Code-8: Alright, new stuff [22:26] Commander Code-8: First we have https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Rodian_outcast [22:27] Commander Code-8: Luca has fixed all the listed issues [22:27] Ayrehead02: Spare [22:27] ecks: bless him [22:27] ecks: spare [22:27] Commander Code-8: Could use a quote from Palpy in the Order 66 section but spare [22:28] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Yuvar_Xal [22:28] Commander Code-8: 1188 words by my count. Infobox-exclusive information. BtS tweaking/citing needed, full novel date unnecessary [22:28] ecks: probe [22:28] Commander Code-8: Somehow all Fate of the Jedi GAs go over the word limit [22:28] Ayrehead02: Probe [22:28] Commander Code-8: probe [22:28] OOM 224: Probe [22:28] Commander Code-8: Yuvar Xal probed [22:29] Commander Code-8: Welcome OOM [22:29] OOM 224: Hey there 22:29] Commander Code-8: Next we have https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Coruscant_Security_Force_Headquarters [22:29] Commander Code-8: Check the TOR mission "Cantina Contusions" to confirm whether the place was really built prior to the Cold War as the article claims Check whether any of the sources mention "CSF Headquarters" with that exact capitalisation Missing a clear date ref for 3643 BBY BTS: needs to mention the novel series. Remove the Appearances list regurgitation as well as the full dates [22:29] ecks: probe [22:29] Ayrehead02: Probe [22:29] Commander Code-8: probe [22:29] OOM 224: Probe [22:29] Commander Code-8: CSF headquarters probed [22:29] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Utai_patron [22:30] Commander Code-8: 156 words in body [22:30] Commander Code-8: probe [22:30] Ayrehead02: Probe [22:30] ecks: probe [22:30] OOM 224: probe [22:30] Commander Code-8: Utai patron probed [22:30] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Zabrak_patron [22:30] Commander Code-8: Luca strikes again [22:30] Ayrehead02: Spare [22:30] ecks: spare [22:30] OOM 224: Spare [22:31] Commander Code-8: Needs some linking in the main ref note but that's minor [22:31] Commander Code-8: spare [22:31] Commander Code-8: Zabrak patron spared [22:31] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Vistis_Garn [22:31] Commander Code-8: Missing Equipment section BTS should expand on the dark side path and mention the Coruscant Security Special Investigation Panel message [22:31] Ayrehead02: Probe [22:31] Commander Code-8: probe [22:31] OOM 224: probe [22:32] ecks: probe [22:32] Commander Code-8: Vistis Garn probed [22:32] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Twi%27lek_bodyguard [22:32] Commander Code-8: Infobox-exclusive information. [22:32] Commander Code-8: Would like to see an image in the body. Can use both "Personality and traits" and "Equipment" sections. This can use some elaboration: "The survival of the character depends on the players' actions." Mediacat needed. [22:33] Commander Code-8: Gotta love missing P&Ts [22:33] Commander Code-8: Describes every Tinder profile [22:33] Commander Code-8: Probe [22:33] ecks: oof [22:33] Ayrehead02: Lol, probe [22:33] ecks: probe [22:34] Commander Code-8: Unidentified Twi'lek probed 22:34] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/George_R._Binks [22:34] Commander Code-8: The New Essential Guide to Characters mentions that in Jar Jar Binks' youth, the Otoh Gunga school dropout went hopped between jobs after being unable to turn to his parents for guidance. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:26, 21 April 2022 (UTC) I know this was previously discussed, but I really feel like the article needs rewriting. First, the intro should only mention the very limited in-universe stuff known about him, and no infobox picture since no confirmed canon depiction. Further, ambiguous canon tag removed. Ambiguous canon tags for a good chunk of the article's body. [22:34] Ayrehead02: Probe [22:35] Commander Code-8: Probe [22:35] ecks: probe [22:35] OOM 224: probe [22:35] Commander Code-8: George probed [22:35] Commander Code-8: Next up: Crockagor https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Crockagor [22:36] Commander Code-8: Issues fixed by Luca [22:36] OOM 224: spare [22:36] ecks: spare [22:36] Ayrehead02: Spare [22:36] Commander Code-8: spare [22:36] Commander Code-8: Crockagor spared [22:36] Commander Code-8: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Nartian [22:36] Commander Code-8: Replace reference to Star Wars Encyclopedia with CSWE and its citation template. Date isn't sourced properly. Body can support an image. Unsourced and redundant information in BTS. [22:36] ecks: I have to object to the first listed issue [22:37] ecks: there is no reason why SWE isn't an equally valid source [22:37] ecks: CSWE isn't used anywhere else in the article so it doesn't reduce the amount of references either [22:37] ecks: there is no rule that says the most recent source must be used [22:38] Commander Code-8: I thought it was generally preferred [22:38] ecks: generally preferred? sure. policy? not really [22:38] Ayrehead02: If it's an updated version of the same thing maybe, but those are totally different books [22:38] ecks: anyway, probe for the remaining issues [22:38] Ayrehead02: Probe [22:39] Commander Code-8: Probe [22:39] Commander Code-8: Nartian probed [22:39] Commander Code-8: Next https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/First [22:39] Commander Code-8: Issues done by Luca [22:39] ecks: the capitalization issue still remains but I'm not sure we want to probe just for that [22:40] Ayrehead02: Agreed, spare [22:40] ecks: it should be easy enough to hunt down someone with Insider 125 [22:40] Ayrehead02: I can check it after the meeting [22:40] Commander Code-8: spare [22:41] OOM 224: euch, my internet connection's crap [22:41] OOM 224: spare [22:41] ecks: spare [22:41] Commander Code-8: First spared 22:41] Commander Code-8: Next: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Human_female_Jedi [22:41] Commander Code-8: Issues all addressed by Luca [22:41] Ayrehead02: Spare [22:42] ecks: spare [22:42] OOM 224: spare [22:42] Commander Code-8: spare [22:42] Commander Code-8: Jedi spared [22:42] Commander Code-8: In the distance Disney seethes [22:42] Commander Code-8: Next up: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rajine [22:42] Commander Code-8: Infobox-exclusive information. Let's see some paragraph breaks and subsectioning in the Biography. Can use an Equipment section. BTS is missing publication date. No Mediacat. [22:43] ecks: I'm not sure you can split the existing paragraphs and subsection it in a better way, but probe for the rest [22:43] Ayrehead02: Probe [22:43] OOM 224: probe [22:43] Commander Code-8: probe [22:44] Commander Code-8: Rajine probed [22:44] Commander Code-8: Any other matters to discuss? [22:44] ecks: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AgriCorps/GA_maintenance_issues [22:44] ecks: got three in the bin [22:45] Ayrehead02: Given the difficulty of accessing Starcruiser info without spending thousands of pounds I'd be willing to give those two a little longer [22:45] ecks: for sure [22:45] ecks: but the TOR article I think we can do [22:45] Ayrehead02: Is Imperial Medical Corps ever not in the maintenance bin? [22:45] Ayrehead02: Probe [22:45] ecks: lolz [22:46] OOM 224: heh, probe [22:46] ecks: probe [22:46] Commander Code-8: probe [22:47] Commander Code-8: Anything else? [22:47] ecks: not article-wise [22:47] Ayrehead02: Nope [22:51] ecks: as an on-the-record note, Zed42 has earned himself a strike [22:51] Commander Code-8: 😦 [22:51] Ayrehead02: Is he not on Wookieevaction still? [22:52] ecks: not according to his userpage [22:52] Master Fredcerique: I fell asleep… [22:52] ecks: not since January 22:52] Ayrehead02: Ah fair, well whoever gets paperwork can add that [22:52] Commander Code-8: Imp is on paperwork