Feb 22 15:03:34 <Ayrehead02> Cool, well then lets begin Feb 22 15:03:53 <Ayrehead02> First up we have a Tommy joint, the Tector-class Feb 22 15:03:53 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tector-class_Star_Destroyer Feb 22 15:04:01 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796330 Feb 22 15:04:05 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Tector-class_Star_Destroyer Feb 22 15:04:23 <Ayrehead02> No relevant change Feb 22 15:04:25 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:04:27 <Ayrehead02> Kill Feb 22 15:04:27 <MasterFred> kill Feb 22 15:04:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> It's going to CAN Feb 22 15:04:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Feb 22 15:04:32 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:04:46 <Ayrehead02> Ok, Tector class killed Feb 22 15:05:07 <Ayrehead02> In a similar vein we now have the Victory-class Feb 22 15:05:08 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Victory-class_Star_Destroyer Feb 22 15:05:13 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796342 Feb 22 15:05:18 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Victory-class_Star_Destroyer Feb 22 15:05:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> Oh God. My baby Feb 22 15:05:30 <Ayrehead02> Again, no meaningful change Feb 22 15:05:33 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:05:34 <Ayrehead02> Kill Feb 22 15:05:35 <MasterFred> Kill Feb 22 15:05:39 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill :( Feb 22 15:05:41 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:05:49 <MasterFred> Going to FAN, Tommy? :P Feb 22 15:05:53 <Ayrehead02> Victory class killed Feb 22 15:05:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> No way :P Feb 22 15:06:00 <MasterFred> :/ Feb 22 15:06:07 <exiledjedi> Man, this is going rough for Tommy, so far. Feb 22 15:06:14 <Tommy-Macaroni> That article is not suitable for FAN Feb 22 15:06:24 <Tommy-Macaroni> It is self inflicted, tbf Feb 22 15:06:26 <Ayrehead02> Next up is Makurth, thankfully nothing to do with Tommy :P Feb 22 15:06:34 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Makurth/Legends Feb 22 15:06:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> ;P Feb 22 15:06:40 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796347 Feb 22 15:06:45 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Makurth/Legends Feb 22 15:06:50 <Ayrehead02> No change Feb 22 15:06:52 <Ayrehead02> Kill Feb 22 15:06:55 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:06:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Feb 22 15:07:02 <MasterFred> Kill Feb 22 15:07:03 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:07:11 <Ayrehead02> Makurth killed Feb 22 15:07:21 <Ayrehead02> Next is Pultimo Feb 22 15:07:22 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Pultimo Feb 22 15:07:25 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796349 Feb 22 15:07:30 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Pultimo Feb 22 15:07:31 <Ayrehead02> No change Feb 22 15:07:32 <Ayrehead02> Kil Feb 22 15:07:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Feb 22 15:07:37 <MasterFred> Kill Feb 22 15:07:53 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:07:54 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:08:08 <Ayrehead02> Pultimo killed Feb 22 15:08:25 <Ayrehead02> Next item is Shar Dakhan Feb 22 15:08:26 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Shar_Dakhan Feb 22 15:08:30 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796351 Feb 22 15:08:35 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Shar_Dakhan Feb 22 15:08:43 <Toprawa> "unknown regions" should be "reasons" :P Feb 22 15:08:57 <Ayrehead02> No change Feb 22 15:08:59 <Ayrehead02> Kill Feb 22 15:09:11 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:09:12 <MasterFred> Kill Feb 22 15:09:14 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Feb 22 15:09:15 <Tommy-Macaroni> lol Feb 22 15:09:16 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:09:32 <Ayrehead02> Chaka Khan killed Feb 22 15:10:02 <MasterFred> I do get sad when I see Legends articles lose status. :/ Feb 22 15:10:15 <Ayrehead02> Now for the battles of Korriban (which I swear I've seen on the review boards a bunch of times) Feb 22 15:10:18 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Second_battle_of_Korriban Feb 22 15:10:23 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796355 Feb 22 15:10:28 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Second_battle_of_Korriban Feb 22 15:10:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> Well you'll be glad I tried to mix up our killing this time round then :P Feb 22 15:11:10 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:11:17 <Tommy-Macaroni> No relevant changes Feb 22 15:11:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill Feb 22 15:11:19 <MasterFred> Kill Feb 22 15:11:20 <Ayrehead02> Kill Feb 22 15:11:22 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:11:39 <Ayrehead02> Korriban V2 killed Feb 22 15:11:44 <Ayrehead02> Now for Korriban V1 Feb 22 15:11:44 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Second_battle_of_Korriban Feb 22 15:11:49 <Ayrehead02> Oops Feb 22 15:12:04 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/First_battle_of_Korriban Feb 22 15:12:08 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796358 Feb 22 15:12:12 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/First_battle_of_Korriban Feb 22 15:12:48 <Ayrehead02> Looks like no relevant changes again Feb 22 15:12:49 <Ayrehead02> Kill Feb 22 15:12:51 <MasterFred> Kill Feb 22 15:12:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Feb 22 15:12:58 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:12:59 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:13:11 <Ayrehead02> Korriban killed again Feb 22 15:13:30 <Ayrehead02> Next we have another battle Feb 22 15:13:36 <Ayrehead02> This time at Primus Goluud Feb 22 15:13:37 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Battle_at_Primus_Goluud Feb 22 15:13:42 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796360 Feb 22 15:13:46 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Battle_at_Primus_Goluud Feb 22 15:13:48 <Ayrehead02> No change Feb 22 15:13:49 <Ayrehead02> Kill Feb 22 15:13:51 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:13:52 <MasterFred> Kill Feb 22 15:13:52 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:13:53 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Feb 22 15:14:06 <Ayrehead02> Battle at Primus Goluud killed Feb 22 15:14:24 <Ayrehead02> Now some vitally important TCW unidentifieds Feb 22 15:14:26 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_BD-3000_luxury_droid_(Senate_hostage_crisis) Feb 22 15:14:30 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796363 Feb 22 15:14:35 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Unidentified_BD-3000_luxury_droid_(Senate_hostage_crisis) Feb 22 15:14:40 <Ayrehead02> No change Feb 22 15:14:41 <Ayrehead02> Kill Feb 22 15:14:42 <MasterFred> Kill Feb 22 15:14:44 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:14:45 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:14:46 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Feb 22 15:14:58 <Ayrehead02> Betty Boop killed Feb 22 15:15:18 <Ayrehead02> Finally, an unidentified battle Feb 22 15:15:18 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_space_battle_(Saesee_Tiin) Feb 22 15:15:23 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8796368 Feb 22 15:15:27 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Unidentified_space_battle_(Saesee_Tiin) Feb 22 15:15:28 <Ayrehead02> No change Feb 22 15:15:29 <Ayrehead02> Kill Feb 22 15:15:31 <Toprawa> Kill Feb 22 15:15:39 <exiledjedi> Kill Feb 22 15:15:40 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Feb 22 15:15:43 <MasterFred> Kill Feb 22 15:16:06 <Ayrehead02> Unidentified battle killed Feb 22 15:16:20 <Ayrehead02> An efficient slaughter if I've ever seen one Feb 22 15:16:31 <Ayrehead02> Now onto the new stuff Feb 22 15:16:47 <Ayrehead02> First up we have a redux candidate from spookly Feb 22 15:16:51 <Ayrehead02> Rilo Tang Feb 22 15:17:02 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rilo_Tang Feb 22 15:17:10 <Ayrehead02> Changes made for issues, recommended for redux Feb 22 15:17:17 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?title=Rilo_Tang&diff=8797136&oldid=8490116 Feb 22 15:17:21 <Toprawa> Redux Feb 22 15:17:26 <exiledjedi> Redux Feb 22 15:17:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> Redux Feb 22 15:17:29 <Ayrehead02> Redux Feb 22 15:17:29 <MasterFred> Redux Feb 22 15:17:36 <Ayrehead02> Rilo Tang reduxed Feb 22 15:18:03 <Ayrehead02> Our next offering is Arthon, https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Arthon Feb 22 15:18:10 <Ayrehead02> Per the new 165 word count rule, is no longer eligible to have subsections. Body word count is 121. Feb 22 15:18:15 <Toprawa> Probe Feb 22 15:18:16 <Ayrehead02> Probe Feb 22 15:18:21 <exiledjedi> Probe Feb 22 15:18:25 <MasterFred> Probe Feb 22 15:18:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Feb 22 15:18:41 <Ayrehead02> Arthon probed Feb 22 15:18:54 <Ayrehead02> Next is all of Hanzo's various word count stuff Feb 22 15:19:13 <Ayrehead02> The following is the sole listed issue for all of them: Feb 22 15:19:13 <Ayrehead02> The following GAs from myself are below the minimum 165 word count Feb 22 15:19:32 <Ayrehead02> Unless anyone strongly objects I'm not going to repost it for each one Feb 22 15:19:39 <Ayrehead02> I'll just post the links Feb 22 15:19:40 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Brangus_Glee%27s_species Feb 22 15:19:58 <Ayrehead02> Probe Feb 22 15:20:03 <Toprawa> Let's batch probe, please Feb 22 15:20:11 <Toprawa> Just list all of them Feb 22 15:20:11 <Ayrehead02> Is that legal, my lord? Feb 22 15:20:13 <Toprawa> Yes Feb 22 15:20:20 <MasterFred> I'm ok probing all at once. Feb 22 15:20:29 <exiledjedi> Please do. Feb 22 15:20:35 <Ayrehead02> Thank god Feb 22 15:20:35 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Brangus_Glee%27s_species Feb 22 15:20:45 <Toprawa> You don't need to link every URL Feb 22 15:20:46 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Bron_Burs%27s_species Feb 22 15:20:49 <Toprawa> Just list them Feb 22 15:21:10 <Ayrehead02> Ah sure Feb 22 15:21:19 <Ayrehead02> Brangus Glee's species Feb 22 15:21:25 <Ayrehead02> Bron Burs's species Feb 22 15:21:27 <Ayrehead02> Bron Burs Feb 22 15:21:32 <Ayrehead02> Niado Duegad Feb 22 15:21:36 <Ayrehead02> Murttoc Yine Feb 22 15:21:41 <Ayrehead02> Caf Treblanc Feb 22 15:21:45 <Ayrehead02> Chall Bekan Feb 22 15:21:48 <Ayrehead02> Maer (soldier) Feb 22 15:21:55 <Ayrehead02> Gunnery captain/Legends Feb 22 15:21:58 <Toprawa> Probe all Feb 22 15:22:01 <Ayrehead02> Probe all Feb 22 15:22:03 <MasterFred> Probe all Feb 22 15:22:08 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe^9 Feb 22 15:22:24 <exiledjedi> Probe all Feb 22 15:22:43 <Ayrehead02> All Hanzo's word count stuff probed Feb 22 15:22:51 <Ayrehead02> Except for: Deacon Eso Feb 22 15:23:04 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Deacon_Eso Feb 22 15:23:12 <Ayrehead02> I had overlooked the fact that Deacon Eso never had his uniform mentioned. Added that, and as of this edit the article is 178 words in the body, so should be fine to remain a GA. Feb 22 15:23:20 <Tommy-Macaroni> Spare Feb 22 15:23:30 <Ayrehead02> Do we want to redux? Feb 22 15:23:49 <Toprawa> I'm not arsing with it Feb 22 15:23:49 <Tommy-Macaroni> Oh good point Feb 22 15:24:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> Fair enough. It isn't a big addition Feb 22 15:24:07 <Tommy-Macaroni> Spare, then Feb 22 15:24:08 <Toprawa> Spare Feb 22 15:24:09 <exiledjedi> Spare Feb 22 15:24:12 <Ayrehead02> Spare Feb 22 15:24:15 <MasterFred> Spare Feb 22 15:24:22 <Ayrehead02> Deacon Eso spared Feb 22 15:24:41 <Ayrehead02> Next up, it looks like the Trition Trade Route got to big Feb 22 15:24:41 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Trition_Trade_Route Feb 22 15:24:48 <Ayrehead02> 1093 words by my count. 01miki10 Feb 22 15:25:06 <Toprawa> Probe Feb 22 15:25:10 <Ayrehead02> Probe Feb 22 15:25:13 <MasterFred> Probe Feb 22 15:25:17 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Feb 22 15:25:18 <MasterFred> That travel times chart is sexy Feb 22 15:25:36 <exiledjedi> Probe Feb 22 15:25:43 <Ayrehead02> Trition Trade Route probed Feb 22 15:26:00 <Ayrehead02> Now some meatier Tope offerings Feb 22 15:26:02 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/13,000,000,000_BBY Feb 22 15:26:13 <Ayrehead02> The official name of the year is "13,000,000,000 BBY," not "13,000,000,000 Before the Battle of Yavin," even though that's what "BBY" stands for. The intro should use the proper term and remove the link from the bolded portion. Feb 22 15:26:13 <Ayrehead02> "...in which it was believed that the galaxy was formed..."; who believed this? Feb 22 15:26:13 <Ayrehead02> General underlinking Feb 22 15:26:13 <Ayrehead02> Paragraph break in the first "Impact" paragraph would be nice Feb 22 15:26:14 <Ayrehead02> BTS unsourced Feb 22 15:26:16 <Ayrehead02> Remove page and chapter numbers from referencing. Toprawa and Ralltiir Feb 22 15:26:19 <Toprawa> Probe Feb 22 15:26:20 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Feb 22 15:26:22 <Ayrehead02> Probe Feb 22 15:26:23 <exiledjedi> Probe Feb 22 15:26:24 <MasterFred> Probe Feb 22 15:26:35 <Ayrehead02> 13000000000000000 BBY probed Feb 22 15:26:46 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/5,000,000,000_BBY Feb 22 15:26:53 <Ayrehead02> The official name of the year is "5,000,000,000 BBY," not "5,000,000,000 Before the Battle of Yavin," even though that's what "BBY" stands for. The intro should use the proper term and remove the link from the bolded portion. Feb 22 15:26:53 <Ayrehead02> Additionally, all of the other bolded years in the intro are actually mentioned in sources, which I'm sure they're not, they should not be mentioned in the article Feb 22 15:26:53 <Ayrehead02> BTS unsourced Feb 22 15:26:53 <Ayrehead02> 5,000,000,000 BBY was not mentioned in Goroth: Slave of the Empire, which predated the creation of the BBY/ABY system. This needs to be rectified and explained in the BTS and the Sources section. Feb 22 15:26:56 <Ayrehead02> Ref 9 needs citation template. Feb 22 15:26:59 <Toprawa> Probe Feb 22 15:27:02 <exiledjedi> Probe Feb 22 15:27:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Feb 22 15:27:04 <Ayrehead02> Probe Feb 22 15:27:21 <Toprawa> unless all of the other bolded years* Feb 22 15:27:47 <MasterFred> Probe Feb 22 15:27:48 <MasterFred> sorry Feb 22 15:27:54 <Ayrehead02> 500000000 BBY Probed Feb 22 15:28:13 <Ayrehead02> Finally for this meeting per earlier agreement, the first of Shay's many many suggestions Feb 22 15:28:14 <Ayrehead02> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_B1_battle_droid_(Endor) Feb 22 15:28:27 <Ayrehead02> 19 BBY has no date reference. Feb 22 15:28:27 <Ayrehead02> Some repeated instances of "this," which is discouraged from what I've seen here recently. Shayanomer (talk) 21:00, February 18, 2020 (UTC) Feb 22 15:28:27 <Ayrehead02> Article is also 1198 words, by my count Feb 22 15:28:33 <Ayrehead02> Toprawa and Ralltiir Feb 22 15:28:33 <Toprawa> Probe Feb 22 15:28:35 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Feb 22 15:28:36 <Ayrehead02> Probe Feb 22 15:28:39 <exiledjedi> Probe Feb 22 15:28:41 <MasterFred> Probe Feb 22 15:28:52 <Ayrehead02> Unidentified B1 battledroid probed Feb 22 15:29:24 <Ayrehead02> I'd usually ask if anyone has anything else, but since we've already got nearly another whole meetings worth to look through I think we can probably call it there Feb 22 15:29:41 <Ayrehead02> Any discussion items? Feb 22 15:29:46 <exiledjedi> Nope. Feb 22 15:30:09 <Tommy-Macaroni> Noooooooooooooo Feb 22 15:30:14 <MasterFred> Nada Feb 22 15:31:00 <Ayrehead02> Ok well then I think we can call the meeting to a close Feb 22 15:31:14 <Ayrehead02> It's been well established that Tommy has paperwork Feb 22 15:31:17 <MasterFred> Sweet. Thanks for hosting, Ayre! Feb 22 15:31:19 <Ayrehead02> Thanks all for coming