Oct 26 15:02:02 <exiledjedi> Okay, welcome to AC Meeting 121. Oct 26 15:02:10 <exiledjedi> Starting with old articles... Oct 26 15:02:19 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jev_Sunrider Oct 26 15:02:46 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8440457 Oct 26 15:02:54 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Jev_Sunrider Oct 26 15:03:17 <exiledjedi> I don't think anything was done for the new issues. Oct 26 15:03:22 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Oct 26 15:03:26 <MasterFred> kill Oct 26 15:03:30 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:03:31 <exiledjedi> kill Oct 26 15:03:32 <ecks> huh, was this extended at 120 or what? Oct 26 15:03:38 <MasterFred> it was Oct 26 15:03:51 <exiledjedi> I guess I missed that in the log. Oct 26 15:03:53 <MasterFred> oh wait Oct 26 15:03:57 <MasterFred> hahaha Oct 26 15:03:57 <ecks> oh, we missed it at 120 Oct 26 15:04:05 <ecks> Articles that were up for review, but were not voted on Oct 26 15:04:05 <ecks> Jev Sunrider Oct 26 15:04:06 <ecks> heh Oct 26 15:04:11 <ecks> okay, kill Oct 26 15:04:18 <exiledjedi> Ah, that was it. Oct 26 15:04:21 <exiledjedi> I remember now. Oct 26 15:04:26 <exiledjedi> Jev Sunrider killed. Oct 26 15:04:43 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Dawn_Pyramid_of_Aargau Oct 26 15:04:47 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564095 Oct 26 15:04:51 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Dawn_Pyramid_of_Aargau Oct 26 15:04:53 <exiledjedi> No changes. Oct 26 15:04:56 <MasterFred> kill Oct 26 15:04:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Oct 26 15:05:00 <exiledjedi> Kill Oct 26 15:05:04 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:05:19 <ecks> kill Oct 26 15:05:25 <exiledjedi> Dawn Pyramid of Aargau killed. Oct 26 15:05:45 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Transe_Decar Oct 26 15:05:50 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564096 Oct 26 15:05:55 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Transe_Decar Oct 26 15:06:05 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:06:08 <Tommy-Macaroni> I'm not sure why Imperators wanted to spare this Oct 26 15:06:09 <exiledjedi> Looks like the redlink was filled in. Oct 26 15:06:24 <exiledjedi> I linked the wrong one on the meeting page. Oct 26 15:06:30 <Tommy-Macaroni> Ah Oct 26 15:06:40 <Tommy-Macaroni> Lol the redlink was it? Oct 26 15:06:42 <ecks> seems fixed to me Oct 26 15:06:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe Oct 26 15:06:45 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Transe_Decar_(second_review) Oct 26 15:06:46 <Tommy-Macaroni> np Oct 26 15:06:47 <MasterFred> Wait, I'm confused. haha Oct 26 15:06:50 <Tommy-Macaroni> Keep, Oct 26 15:06:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> evem Oct 26 15:06:54 <ecks> oh, wait, what Oct 26 15:07:01 <ecks> okay kill Oct 26 15:07:04 <exiledjedi> Kill Oct 26 15:07:08 <MasterFred> oh, kill Oct 26 15:07:10 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:07:15 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill then Oct 26 15:07:18 <Tommy-Macaroni> wut Oct 26 15:07:22 <exiledjedi> Transe Decar killed. Oct 26 15:07:35 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Teelo_Vang Oct 26 15:07:38 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564097 Oct 26 15:07:47 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Teelo_Vang Oct 26 15:07:51 <exiledjedi> No changes. Oct 26 15:07:54 <MasterFred> kill Oct 26 15:07:55 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Oct 26 15:07:56 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:08:00 <ecks> kill Oct 26 15:08:24 <exiledjedi> Teelo Vang killed. Oct 26 15:08:36 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Owen_Delstar Oct 26 15:08:40 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564098 Oct 26 15:08:43 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Owen_Delstar Oct 26 15:08:46 <exiledjedi> No changes. Oct 26 15:08:48 <Tommy-Macaroni> kil Oct 26 15:08:51 <exiledjedi> Kill Oct 26 15:08:52 <ecks> kill Oct 26 15:08:54 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:08:58 <MasterFred> kill Oct 26 15:09:17 <exiledjedi> Owen Delstar killed. Oct 26 15:09:37 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Bask_Modl Oct 26 15:09:40 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564099 Oct 26 15:09:45 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Bask_Modl Oct 26 15:09:48 <ecks> kill Oct 26 15:09:48 <exiledjedi> No changes. Oct 26 15:09:50 <exiledjedi> Kill Oct 26 15:09:54 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Oct 26 15:09:58 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:10:07 <MasterFred> kill Oct 26 15:10:10 <exiledjedi> Bask Modl killed. Oct 26 15:10:17 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Dias_Athacorr Oct 26 15:10:21 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564100 Oct 26 15:10:26 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Dias_Athacorr Oct 26 15:10:28 <exiledjedi> No changes. Oct 26 15:10:29 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Oct 26 15:10:30 <exiledjedi> Kill Oct 26 15:10:36 <ecks> kill Oct 26 15:10:55 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:10:56 <MasterFred> kill Oct 26 15:11:07 <exiledjedi> Dias Athacorr killed. Oct 26 15:11:14 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jerrit Oct 26 15:11:18 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564101 Oct 26 15:11:24 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Jerrit Oct 26 15:11:26 <exiledjedi> No changes. Oct 26 15:11:31 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:11:32 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Oct 26 15:11:35 <exiledjedi> Kill Oct 26 15:11:35 <MasterFred> kill Oct 26 15:11:35 <ecks> kill Oct 26 15:11:40 <exiledjedi> Jerrit killed. Oct 26 15:12:06 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Gor/Legends Oct 26 15:12:10 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564102 Oct 26 15:12:13 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Gor/Legends Oct 26 15:12:17 <exiledjedi> No changes. Oct 26 15:12:23 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:12:24 <Tommy-Macaroni> kli Oct 26 15:12:27 <exiledjedi> Kill Oct 26 15:12:30 <ecks> kill Oct 26 15:12:37 <MasterFred> kill Oct 26 15:12:39 <exiledjedi> Gor/Legends killed. Oct 26 15:12:49 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Geoff_f%27Tuhns Oct 26 15:12:53 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564103 Oct 26 15:12:59 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Geoff_f%27Tuhns Oct 26 15:13:01 <exiledjedi> No changes. Oct 26 15:13:05 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:13:07 <MasterFred> kill Oct 26 15:13:09 <exiledjedi> Kill Oct 26 15:13:12 <ecks> kill Oct 26 15:13:14 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Oct 26 15:13:25 <exiledjedi> Geoff f'Tuhns killed. Oct 26 15:13:36 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Kulless Oct 26 15:13:40 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=8564105 Oct 26 15:13:56 <exiledjedi> No changes. Oct 26 15:13:58 <Tommy-Macaroni> kill Oct 26 15:14:00 <ecks> kill Oct 26 15:14:01 <MasterFred> kutless Oct 26 15:14:03 <Ayrehead02> Kill Oct 26 15:14:05 <exiledjedi> Kill Oct 26 15:14:05 <MasterFred> kill oops Oct 26 15:14:15 <exiledjedi> Kulless killed. Oct 26 15:14:25 <exiledjedi> All right, that is it for old articles, onto the new ones. Oct 26 15:14:37 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Nadaa Oct 26 15:14:46 <exiledjedi> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 26 15:14:46 <exiledjedi> General underlinking Oct 26 15:14:46 <exiledjedi> The intro is 120 words, and the Bio is 174. That's a pretty good indication that the intro needs to be reduced in size somewhat. Oct 26 15:14:46 <exiledjedi> Equipment section? Oct 26 15:14:46 <exiledjedi> A recent edit added Kath Soucie as the voice actress to the BTS, which I'm not sure can be sourced to the game itself or not. Someone should check and confirm this. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:51, October 21, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:14:48 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:14:51 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:14:53 <MasterFred> robe Oct 26 15:14:54 <Ayrehead02> Probe Oct 26 15:14:58 <ecks> probe Oct 26 15:15:05 <exiledjedi> Nadaa probed. Oct 26 15:15:24 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mallohe Oct 26 15:15:32 <exiledjedi> I'd like to see the intro cut down a little bit in size, perhaps. It seems rather large in size compared to the rest of the body. Even in it's current state, it could use a paragraph break, as could the Bio, and I'm not both need to be two paragraphs in length. Oct 26 15:15:32 <exiledjedi> Some underlinking Oct 26 15:15:32 <exiledjedi> Bio could definitely use at least one paragraph break Oct 26 15:15:32 <exiledjedi> The Bio image should then be expanded in size. The current thumbnail is way too small. Oct 26 15:15:32 <exiledjedi> Some of the P/T content belongs in an Equipment section Oct 26 15:15:32 <exiledjedi> BTS could use at least one paragraph break. Maybe an image too? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:51, October 21, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:15:45 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:15:47 <Ayrehead02> Probe Oct 26 15:15:47 <MasterFred> probe Oct 26 15:15:48 <exiledjedi> Heh, I remember writing this ages ago. Oct 26 15:15:48 <ecks> probe Oct 26 15:15:49 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:15:58 <exiledjedi> Mallohe probed. Oct 26 15:16:09 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Orland Oct 26 15:16:15 <exiledjedi> Digitize comic image Oct 26 15:16:15 <exiledjedi> No image for the Bio? Might be able to fit one in there. Oct 26 15:16:15 <exiledjedi> Infobox Affiliations field is limited to two bullet items Oct 26 15:16:15 <exiledjedi> Some of the P/T content belongs in an Equipment section Oct 26 15:16:15 <exiledjedi> The Legacy comics say their events take place "approximately" 137 years after the Battle of Yavin, not in 137 ABY necessarily. This should be revised in the article. Oct 26 15:16:15 <exiledjedi> I'd like to see a specific date for the comic's publishing in the BTS. Oct 26 15:16:15 <exiledjedi> If there are other stormtroopers in this guy's unit, then it's impossible to distinguish who is who, thus making the last BTS sentence unnecessary. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:51, October 21, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:16:15 <MasterFred> Well now you get to rewrite it. :P Oct 26 15:16:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:16:30 <Ayrehead02> Probe Oct 26 15:16:32 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:16:32 <MasterFred> probe Oct 26 15:16:34 <ecks> probe Oct 26 15:16:40 <exiledjedi> Orland probed. Oct 26 15:16:49 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Piard Oct 26 15:16:56 <exiledjedi> Digitize comic images Oct 26 15:16:56 <exiledjedi> Redlink Oct 26 15:16:56 <exiledjedi> Some of the P/T content belongs in an Equipment section Oct 26 15:16:56 <exiledjedi> BTS should have a publication date for the comic. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:24, October 22, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:17:06 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:17:09 <MasterFred> probe Oct 26 15:17:09 <Ayrehead02> Probe Oct 26 15:17:13 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:17:39 <ecks> probe Oct 26 15:17:44 <exiledjedi> Piard probed. Oct 26 15:17:56 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Lien-Tsai_Qel-Droma Oct 26 15:18:04 <exiledjedi> A bit of underlinking Oct 26 15:18:04 <exiledjedi> P/T could use a paragraph break Oct 26 15:18:04 <exiledjedi> BTS unsourced Oct 26 15:18:04 <exiledjedi> Authors of both notable works in BTS should be mentioned. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:24, October 22, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:18:15 <Ayrehead02> Probe Oct 26 15:18:19 <MasterFred> probe Oct 26 15:18:20 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:18:33 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:18:45 <ecks> probe Oct 26 15:18:50 <exiledjedi> Lien-Tsai Qel-Droma probed. Oct 26 15:19:01 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rebel_Friend Oct 26 15:19:10 <exiledjedi> The first sentence of the P/T is pretty meaningless and should just be removed Oct 26 15:19:10 <exiledjedi> Some of the P/T content belongs in an Equipment section Oct 26 15:19:10 <exiledjedi> BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:24, October 22, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:19:23 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:19:26 <MasterFred> probe Oct 26 15:19:26 <Ayrehead02> Probe Oct 26 15:19:28 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:19:31 <ecks> probe Oct 26 15:19:34 <exiledjedi> Rebel Friend probed. Oct 26 15:19:43 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Joc_Sah Oct 26 15:19:51 <exiledjedi> Digitize comic images Oct 26 15:19:51 <exiledjedi> Underlinking Oct 26 15:19:51 <exiledjedi> Infobox-exclusive information Oct 26 15:19:51 <exiledjedi> The intro seems a little big. It could certainly use a paragraph break in its current state, and I'm not sure it needs to be more than one paragraph when the Bio is only three. Oct 26 15:19:51 <exiledjedi> It's unnecessary and redundant in articles this short to repeat species/sex in the Bio and P/T Oct 26 15:19:51 <exiledjedi> Pretty sure the 19 BBY date can't be sourced straight to the comic Oct 26 15:19:51 <exiledjedi> Some of the P/T content belongs in an Equipment section Oct 26 15:19:51 <exiledjedi> BTS unsourced Oct 26 15:19:51 <exiledjedi> Publication date for comic story would be nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:24, October 22, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:20:05 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:20:06 <Ayrehead02> Probe Oct 26 15:20:07 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:20:10 <MasterFred> probe Oct 26 15:20:29 <ecks> probe Oct 26 15:20:36 <exiledjedi> Joc Sah probed. Oct 26 15:20:42 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Taggart_(Senate_Guard)/Legends Oct 26 15:20:50 <exiledjedi> The intro is 56% as large as the Biography, which is really unnecessary. That should be cut down some. Oct 26 15:20:50 <exiledjedi> Some of the P/T content belongs in an Equipment section Oct 26 15:20:50 <exiledjedi> "Taggart was a Human male who lived during the waning years of the Galactic Republic." The italicized portion of this sentence can't really be sourced to this single TCW episode. Oct 26 15:20:50 <exiledjedi> BTS: Oct 26 15:20:50 <exiledjedi> Should be revised to remove "first" appearance; this is his only appearance Oct 26 15:20:50 <exiledjedi> "...the fourteenth episode of the fourth season of the Star Wars: The Clone Wars television series." really needs to be sourced to the episode guide or something. Oct 26 15:20:50 <exiledjedi> Should mention the original air date. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:24, October 22, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:21:13 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:21:15 <Ayrehead02> Probe Oct 26 15:21:19 <MasterFred> probe Oct 26 15:21:20 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:21:32 <ecks> probe Oct 26 15:21:34 <exiledjedi> Taggart (Senate Guard)/Legends probed. Oct 26 15:21:41 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Oo_Wen Oct 26 15:21:47 <exiledjedi> Underlinking Oct 26 15:21:47 <exiledjedi> Neither of the BBY dates in the Bio are referenced correctly Oct 26 15:21:47 <exiledjedi> BTS unsourced Oct 26 15:21:47 <exiledjedi> Remove chapter numbers from referencing. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:24, October 22, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:21:54 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:21:57 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:21:59 <MasterFred> probe Oct 26 15:23:27 <exiledjedi> Anybody else? Oct 26 15:23:51 <exiledjedi> ecks / ayrehead? Oct 26 15:23:57 <ecks> er sorry Oct 26 15:23:58 <Ayrehead02> Probe Oct 26 15:23:58 <ecks> probe Oct 26 15:24:00 <Ayrehead02> Sorry Oct 26 15:24:03 <exiledjedi> No problem. Oct 26 15:24:05 <exiledjedi> Oo Wen probed. Oct 26 15:24:11 <exiledjedi> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Yennir_of_the_Green Oct 26 15:24:18 <exiledjedi> Infobox Affiliations field is limited to two items Oct 26 15:24:18 <exiledjedi> Pretty sure the 3641 BBY date can't be sourced straight to the Insider story Oct 26 15:24:18 <exiledjedi> BTS: Oct 26 15:24:18 <exiledjedi> Unsourced Oct 26 15:24:18 <exiledjedi> Should be rewritten to avoid the "first" appearance; this is the only appearance Oct 26 15:24:18 <exiledjedi> Short story title should be formatted correctly. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:24, October 22, 2019 (UTC) Oct 26 15:24:41 <Tommy-Macaroni> probe Oct 26 15:24:43 <MasterFred> probe Oct 26 15:24:44 <exiledjedi> Probe Oct 26 15:24:49 <Ayrehead02> ProbeThis kinda seems like a sofixit, but probe Oct 26 15:25:51 <MasterFred> I wouldn't say unsourced info and a bad date ref are sofixits. Oct 26 15:26:03 <exiledjedi> Yennir of the Green probed. Oct 26 15:26:10 <exiledjedi> Anyone have anything else? Oct 26 15:26:17 <MasterFred> negatory Oct 26 15:26:21 <Ayrehead02> Oh I'd missed the date, fair Oct 26 15:26:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> no Oct 26 15:26:45 <Ayrehead02> Nothing from me Oct 26 15:27:10 <exiledjedi> All right, Tope is on paperwork for the next meeting. Oct 26 15:27:15 <exiledjedi> Thanks for coming. Oct 26 15:27:22 <MasterFred> Thanks for hosting! Oct 26 15:27:26 <exiledjedi> No problem. Oct 26 15:27:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> Coolio, thanks for hosting EJ