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Feemor
Things to do
- Major overhaul and update for new material as identity has been established.
- Done. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 19:05, May 24, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. QuiGonJinn
Removal of GA status
- Placed on probation at AC meeting 35. - Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 14:37, May 23, 2011 (UTC) - Probation extended to Redux at Meeting 36. CC7567 (talk) 21:00, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
- GA status kept on October 9, 2011. 1358 (Talk) 08:39, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Redux review
- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a reduxed good article. The result of the discussion was Good article status kept. Please do not modify the page.
- Redux comments: Reduxed per Meeting 36.
- Date added: June 25, 2011
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Support
Sorry this took so long. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:18, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 03:50, October 7, 2011 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 08:35, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Object
- Toprawa:
Intro objections first. Please reload the infobox to include newly added field parameters.- Done.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:15, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
- Done.--Exiled Jedi
I'm not sure I'm really understanding exactly what this is meaning to say. Can we try and reword this any? "His failure as Xanatos' teacher prompted Jinn to relinquish his success in training Feemor."Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:29, July 31, 2011 (UTC)- I hope this is better than it was before.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:15, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
- I hope this is better than it was before.--Exiled Jedi
I can't remember exactly myself, but I believe there is canonical precedent for capitalizing "Knighthood" in this instance (though I may be incorrect). I feel this should be looked into and capitalized if necessary: "His knighthood also saw Jinn promoted..."- This will require some research, I'll reply back within a few days.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:34, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
- There is a canonical precendent for capitalizing "Knighthood". In the Power of the Jedi Sourcebook it is capitalized. It was hard to find a source that didn't just say that someone attained the rank of Jedi Knight. I capitalized the instance of Knighthood that was not capitalized.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:31, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
- There is a canonical precendent for capitalizing "Knighthood". In the Power of the Jedi Sourcebook it is capitalized. It was hard to find a source that didn't just say that someone attained the rank of Jedi Knight. I capitalized the instance of Knighthood that was not capitalized.--Exiled Jedi
- This will require some research, I'll reply back within a few days.--Exiled Jedi
Each Sources list item that does not literally mention Feemor's name needs to include the {{Imo}} template.- I took care of these, and for the first indirect mention, I created a new template, {{1stim}}, which I think would rather useful. I you think it is a bad idea please say so, I just thought it might be useful.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:34, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
- I understand your reasoning for creating it, but I would recommend just staying with what we've always used (which in this case would be (First mentioned) (Indirect mention only)), which I think clarifies the exact nature of the appearance more specifically. In other words, we don't differentiate between Mo/Imo for the purpose of defining the "first mention." Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:40, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- All right, my template did seem a little awkward to me. You can delete the template if you want to.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:44, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. An additional point to this objection. If the character is mentioned in the Episode I Visual Dictionary, it will also most likely be included in the compendium Star Wars: The Complete Visual Dictionary, which will also need to be added to the Sources list if so. Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:53, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- He is indeed. I added it to the sources. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:22, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. An additional point to this objection. If the character is mentioned in the Episode I Visual Dictionary, it will also most likely be included in the compendium Star Wars: The Complete Visual Dictionary, which will also need to be added to the Sources list if so. Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:53, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- All right, my template did seem a little awkward to me. You can delete the template if you want to.--Exiled Jedi
- I understand your reasoning for creating it, but I would recommend just staying with what we've always used (which in this case would be (First mentioned) (Indirect mention only)), which I think clarifies the exact nature of the appearance more specifically. In other words, we don't differentiate between Mo/Imo for the purpose of defining the "first mention." Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:40, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- I took care of these, and for the first indirect mention, I created a new template, {{1stim}}, which I think would rather useful. I you think it is a bad idea please say so, I just thought it might be useful.--Exiled Jedi
- Excellent BTS, whoever wrote it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:41, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
- It wasn't me.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:34, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
- It wasn't me.--Exiled Jedi
The SW.com Databank link in the BTS text is no longer functioning. Please replace it with one of the functioning Archive links from the Sources list.Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)- Done. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 20:28, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. QuiGonJinn
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