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Re: Quano
Hey Nighthawk, glad to hear you're interested in getting started into the GAN process! After taking a quick look at Quano, the first thing I'd say is to be careful of POV-oriented wording. Make sure that all of the article's text, including the BTS, is written from a completely objective point of view. Also be careful about things that would be considered speculation/original research. For instance: "He served as a perfect way to bring Set Harth and Darth Zannah together." Unless there is a source material that specifically says this, then it is speculation/original research, and it must be removed. Also make sure to add a quote to each of the sections, if possible—I know that he had plenty of lines on Dynasty of Evil, so there should be one for each section. Also, regarding the BTS—this section can sometimes be tricky, especially when you're first starting out. It's not always easy to know how you should arrange the information within the section and whether or not certain things should be included—this is one good example of how to write up this section. One last thing: if you are interested, feel free to sign up for WookieeProject New Sith Wars. It's a community project in which several users work on articles covering material relating to the New Sith Wars and the surrounding era, including information from the Darth Bane trilogy. If you need any more help or have any further questions, just let me know. :) Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 23:50, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Hey Nighthawk, it's looking pretty good right now. In the P&T, I think it would be good to provide an example for some things—for instance, for the sentence "With his bodyguards…who ventured into his bar" it might be good to add something along the lines of "as he did when visited by Set Harth." Also, why did he become more afraid and wary of people after the massacre and his run-in with Set Harth? Giving this a little more explanation would probably be beneficial. I'm not sure about whether or not it's fair to say he became easy to manipulate in general—maybe just say that Zannah found that he was easy to manipulate. I think it's a little too colloquial to say that he would do "anything" for credits. It also might be good to add something about how he urged Pommat to "go big". Keep up the good work! :) Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:15, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Haha don't worry, you're not badgering me at all—it's good that you want to learn the ropes here. The one thing I see from the changes made to the P&T is parentheses use—while it's not against the rules to use parentheses, it's usually more professional-looking to use dashes instead. You've done a great job improving the article—feel free to nominate it whenever you like, and I'll be sure to give it a full review. :) Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:59, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
I just wanted to remind you that there are objections to Quano from August 24, and if you don't fix them until September 7, the nomination will be considered inactive and removed from the GAN. Thanks! -- 1358 (Talk) 06:41, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
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