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Userbox

Hey MJ, I hope you don't mind that I stole your Comprehensive Articles userbox. I thought it was handy so I threw it on my page. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 21:08, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Review query

Could you please review, copy-edit, and word-count Gaan? Plus, do you know anybody that owns CWA 5?—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 00:08, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Objection:

  • "Gaan offered him the options of either fighting alongside him and his people, or staying in the building and getting killed. Sah agreed," Agreed to what? I realize the second part of the sentence identifies which option Sah chose, but you should explicitly state which option he agreed to before giving the outcome.

And that's it, at 714 words. As far as CWA 5, CC7567; Taral, Dark Lord of the Sith; and Xwing328 all list it as a part of their respective collections, so you can try one of them. In the future, to find someone with a particular source, you can go to the article for the source in question, click "What links here" in the sidebar, and select the User: namespace; just make sure to review the userpage to ensure it's actually listed as a part of their collection, as some links may appear from things like quote sources. Let me know if you have any questions. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 03:22, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maulkiller

Wouldn't under Maulkiller's info box under species say: Human/Zabrak Hybrid Clone? It says it in the paragraph next to that. -(Master CJ 04:03, July 27, 2010 (UTC))

  • Based on the information in the article, that makes sense to me. Next time, just be bold and fix it yourself. ;) The only reason I even edited that article was because I was bored during recent changes patrolling and saw that it needed some cleanup; I'm not familiar with the source. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 19:25, July 27, 2010 (UTC)
    • I tried but it wouldn't let me for some reason. -(Master CJ 20:39, July 28, 2010 (UTC))
      • Well, this diff from two minutes after that message shows that you successfully added it. A check of your abuse filter log, however, shows that you triggered a filter designed to prevent new users from adding external links two days ago. Were you trying to add an external link? If so, that would account for triggering the filter and having the edit disallowed. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 21:02, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
        • Yeah, didn't release that, thanks for the heads up. -(Master CJ 04:28, July 30, 2010 (UTC))
          • No problem. BTW, you shouldn't have problems with that filter anymore, as your account is now over four days old, which is the threshold for that filter and many others. Let me know if you have any other questions. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 04:33, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ohio

Hello there, i noticed you are an ohio native as well. I currently attend OSU. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

More copyedits

Could you do copy-edits and give review and word counts for Joc Sah, Remy, and Sev? I know that some links are missing, auch as for the clone armor, I intend to fix that soon. Thanks in advance!—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:30, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

  • Done. No objections to any of them, but I did make a correction to a quote in both Sah (bio) and Remy (P&T); please verify what the actual comic says and revert and add a [sic] if the error is actually in the comic. Otherwise, nice job. Word counts: Joc Sah, 917; Remy, 561; Sev, 522. Let me know if you have any questions. Also, just to let you know, I will be taking a break from the Wook starting within the next few days while I prepare for and attend Celebration V. Once I go on break, I'll be mostly unavailable until mid- to late August. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 19:09, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
    • No, the way you correct them is the right way, that was my mistake. Thanks for your help, and enjoy CV!—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:28, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Serra

Hey, MJ. When you have time, could you copyedit Col Serra? Thanks. QuiGonJinn 20px(Talk) 10:15, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oid

Hey, I've replaced the {{Oid}} tag on File:119.gif rather than the CSD one because it is the exact tag to use for the purpose; a file made obsolete by a more suitable format version and to be speedy deleted. As far as I'm aware, {{Ifd}} should be used for speedy deletion of files as well, not {{Delete}}. Sorry for making a bit of a deal out of it =D NAYAYEN:TALK 23:40, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Scavenger's Guide to Droids & 3C-series

Hi, can I get any relevant info for 3C-series utility droid what Scavenger's Guide to Droids possibly has? Most likely under T3-series utility droid and/or Duwani Mechanical Products company if at all. Thanks (: --Tm_T (Talk) 19:53, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

  • I don't see a listing for either model in the table of contents, and companies aren't listed separately, only under their respective models. I'm not familiar with the subject matter, so I don't know what else it might be listed under, and I don't have the time to do a page-by-page search right now, as I'm in final preparation mode to leave for Orlando in about 12 hours. I would suggest asking someone else; CC7567 lists the book in his collection, so you might be able to get the information, if any, from him. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 20:40, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thanks for quick answer (: --Tm_T (Talk) 20:45, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

FAN template question

Hi Jonathan. I had a quick question for you. How is it that Template:FAN editintro appears on top of the edit box on the FA review pages that haven't been created yet? I saw that the standard "This is a FA, don't eff it up!" template is tied into the .js, but I can't seem to find what this one is tied into. Any help you could provide would be appreciated. Thanks! - Brandon Rhea 15px (talk) 04:26, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

  • It's done via a parameter in the URL for the edit page specified in the {{FAnom}} template code, specifically the part that says &editintro=Template:FAN_editintro. It's a native MediaWiki feature and does not require any additional code, JS or otherwise. The "This is a FA, don't eff it up!" message is accomplished by simply using JS to modify all edit links on the page to include that parameter, but that's all the JS does; the actual display of that message when you click the edit link uses the URL parameter and the accompanying native MediaWiki function. Let me know if you have any further questions. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 22:05, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Classified

Hey MJ,

I am in need of your serviced yet again. Care to run through this for me please? Same terms as always, thanks in advance.—Tommy 9281 23:30, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Confused

Hi again

Thanks for the help but im still confused on how u and other users made the biological information and other information cause when ever id it turned wrong. Please Help. User:Cadbanekiller

Thanks and one more thing when ever i post my profile picture thing it wont show or on my other pic. —Unsigned comment by Cadbanekiller (talk • contribs)

What happened

Do u know what happened to wookiepedia questions cause i wanted that but its gone now do u know what happened?Cadbanekiller 11:17, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Request

Could you possible give this article a copy-edit? Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:04, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

CSWE

Hey, Jonathan. I was told that you are in possession of the CSWE. If so, could you see if Sinker has an entry? Thanks man. JangFett (Talk) 02:12, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Another r...

Could you possible give Lanchu Skaa a copy-edit? Clone Commander Lee Talk 19:07, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Cognizance

Hey MJ,

Can you run through Darth Cognus when you get a moment please? I'm also having Jonjedigrandmaster and Chack Jadson take a look since they are familiar with the source material, so don't be alarmed if they make edits. Same terms as always, thanks in advance.—Tommy 9281 01:24, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

  • Just hoping you didn't forget about me...—Tommy 9281 18:55, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
    • I was just starting to look at it when you left that message. ;) I have to run a quick errand right now, but I'll be going through it as soon as I get back. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 18:57, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
      • All done now. Apologies for the delay, but my weekend was unusually hectic, and I didn't know from one minute to the next whether I would be able to sit down and go through the whole article in one sitting (as I prefer to do) without being interrupted, so I ended up having to wait until today. Let me know if you have any questions. —Master Jonathan 20px (Jedi Council Chambers) 20:57, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
        • No worries at all, homie, I completely understand how that is. Thanks again,—Tommy 9281 21:04, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

ct wording tweak

Hi! Just letting you know that the wording of a ct you've recently voted in has changed slightly. It went from 'If a droid has gender-specific programming, refer to them as "he" or "she" rather than "it".' to 'If a droid has gender-specific programming and is predominantly referred to as "he" or "she" in canon, refer to them as "he" or "she" rather than "it".' Very minor tweak. Let me know if you hate it. Menkooroo 05:20, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sev's ARC trooper

Could you copy-edit and review the article? Thanks in advance.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 15:55, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Battle Royale

Hey MJ,

Duel on Roqoo Depot when you get a chance please? I've also asked Grunny and Jonjedi to have a go at it, so don't be alarmed if you notice them editing. Same terms as usual, thanks in advance.—Tommy 9281 00:18, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Bomb squad troopers

Could you possibly give Clone ordnance specialists a copy-edit and a word count? Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:39, September 1, 2010 (UTC)