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I have no problem, mate, but the text you put in the page wasn't correctly written and had a couple of grammar mistakes. You also just put it in a random position in the page and some of the information your text held was already in the article. You also put it in the wrong place. You put it in the Legends article, while your text is supposed to be in the Canon version.
First Order Stormtrooper Squad Leader's were Sergeant Stormtroopers within the First Order.
- No idea why the reader is supposed to be informed about this. Something like this would be best on the First Order military article (if there is one). If you really want to tell the reader that the First Order also have sergeants in their army, it should be worded differently.
Squad leaders (Sergeants) were responsible for all training, discipline, mentoring and conducted tactical planning and execution of orders in conjunction with the platoon leader at squad level.
- This is actually very well written, but it's still on the wrong article. I'd suggest you put it in the canon version.
He would lead teams of seven Troopers and one Corporal.
- This isn't backed up by anything. There's no actual number on the amount of people a sergeant would lead and there's usually no guarantee that the squad members would have any of those two ranks.
The Corporal acted as the Sergeant's assistant squad leader and conducted all administration within the squad.
- This is good, it could be on, but on the canon article instead.
The squad consisted of two fire teams, Alpha and Bravo. In a flanking attack, Alpha the (Sergeant and four other Troopers) would conduct the assault on the objective while Bravo Team, the (Corporal, x2 Gunner Troopers armed with FWMB-10 repeating blasters and a Marksman armed with a F-11D enhanced scope) would provide fire support (base of fire) to the assaulting team. A Stormtrooper platoon consisted of a lieutenant (Platoon Leader), Sergeant Major (Platoon Sergeant), Trooper x1 (platoon signaller), x4 Sergeants (squad leaders), x4 Corporals (assistant squad leaders) and x28 Troopers.
- Once again, like I said back at the "seven Troopers and one Corporal", there is no guarantee on what a squad is composed of. Removing your content wasn't a "f*** you", it was a "great job, it just needs a little puffing up, removal of unnecessary facts and onto another article". --LoLuX12 (talk) 02:22, April 4, 2016 (UTC)