Talk: Darth Malevolous

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What to do?

For the NSW project, you could write a character article, for instance Kas'im. Or for someone smaller, what about the Makurth Fohargh? --Eyrezer 23:35, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

Phaseera

Nice work. If you're looking to expand this to the point of a featured or good article, I'd recommend splitting the article into sections and sourcing the material (what comes from PoD, what comes from JvS, that sort of thing). The sections usually used for battles are "Prelude", "The battle", and "Aftermath". For "Prelude", write about what led to the battle. What was its significance? Why was it fought? Who was there and why did they decide to fight? For "The battle" describe the methods of attack, and the progress of the battle. You've done some of this already, by describing "Dessel"'s actions, and being outnumbered, but it could stand to be expanded a bit. For "Aftermath", describe what happened following the conclusion of the battle. What was the effect on the people who fought? What role did it play in the overarching combat to follow? That sort of thing. To finish, you might want to write a brief "Behind the Scenes", explaining in what books this fictional battle appeared, and what the author was trying to accomplish by explaining what happened at Phaseera. Hope that helps some. Cull Tremayne 22:37, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Battles

Hello Malevolous,

I noticed on your userpage that you've set up for yourself a format for writing battle articles. I have some experience in this area, so if you ever need a hand or advise on one (or any other article you may be working on), I'd be more than happy to assist you. Cheers!—Tommy(Clean face and hands)The Anvil 22:07, 28 May 2008 (UTC)

Blocked

Dialog-error You have been blocked from editing for one week for vandalizing talk pages. Please do not do so again upon your return. To contest this block, please contact the blocking administrator with the reason you believe the block is unjustified. Graestan(Talk) 16:22, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

All a misunderstanding. We've got it figured out now.—Darth Malevolous40px(Through power I gain victory.) 19:27, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Re:

Thanks a lot. =D I've been planning on bringing it to FA. DC 02:41, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

Hi

Hey its me. Been a long time. I have no time for scouts or wookieepedia any more because marching band owns my life. I get my life back Nov. 17, just 11 more days left(yes I'm counting). just read Clone Wars and Order 66, great books can't wait to talk to you about them. See you later. Darth Liberator.

Thanks for letting me borrow the book Coruscant nights. I noticed something at the beginning I thought was kind of odd. The author wrote that Nick Rostu shot a stormtrooper in the chest and that it did nothing and that only a pointblank shot at maximum power would do anything, but you and I know that stormtrooper armor is crap and a direct hit at anything close to maximum power will shatter it. I'll give you the books back ASAP. Darth Liberator.

Hey, i lost your email. Send me an email so i can put you on my contact list. Thanks. Darth Liberator.

Force armor and Force shield

Hey there. I noticed on the Force Armor talk page that you said something about Sith Blademaster Kas'im and Force shield. I'm going to make Force shield a disambiguation page and it would be great if you could create a page for his Force shield power since I know nothing about it. I'll create a redlink for you, but please make any changes you need. Thanks : ) * Cylka * 22:06, 20 October 2008 (UTC)

  • thanks for getting back to me. I'm more of a KotOR kind of girl. Here's the Force Shield disambig page. I tentatively titled 'your' page Force Shield (Sith power) since there seems to be a 'Jedi' power as well : ) * Cylka * 22:58, 21 October 2008 (UTC)
    • Hello there. The power you two are speaking of is actually called Force Barrier. Hope this helps.—Tommy928120px (Peace is a lie) 23:19, 21 October 2008 (UTC)
      • Hey, no sweat. I've already made the necessary adjustments. If you need anything else, just let me know.—Tommy928120px (Peace is a lie) 23:26, 21 October 2008 (UTC)
        • Yes, I just saw it. It works for me. Thanks for your help. I'm just glad it's all straightened out : ) * Cylka * 23:37, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

NSW

Hey,

I noticed that you have an interest in things pertaining to the New Sith Wars. I may be able to assist you in your endeavors.—Tommy928120px (Peace is a lie) 23:39, 21 October 2008 (UTC)

Re: Duel on Serenno

Hey, just for future reference, you should reply to objections on the FAN page for your nom. If you believe you have addressed an objection then simply put #*Addressed (or however you want to say it) below each objection. When the reviewer (ie. Me) is satisfied then they will strike the objection themselves. Most users will watch the FAN page to see if objections have been addressed. It makes it easier if you edit the section that your nom starts with so the name is shown in the edit summary; makes it much quicker. As for your queries:

  • Intro: Is the gender and exact order in which the assassins were killed necessary? You can merge it with the following sentence easily.
    • My question is this. Is the gender and exact order really unnecessary? I am willing to change it, but it didn't feel bulky or confusing to me.
      • Their gender isn't actually important in the intro at least. One thing you might wish to do also is specify who killed them. Eg. "...were killed first by Othone (or whoever). A third Human male..."
  • The attribution for the quote in aftermath seems a bit awkward. We already know who they are.
    • For this one I wasn't entirely sure on whether quotes need to be treated as though they are specifically part of the article, or available for other usage.
      • The quotes are part of the article and should be treated as such. The current wording would be suitable for something like WP:QOTD.

I'll strike the objections you've already fixed. When I have the book to hand then I may have some more for you. Nayayen18pxtalk 12:03, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Kidnap attempt on Serenno

Please note that objections made to Kidnap attempt on Serenno are beginning to reach their point of two-week inactivity. If not fixed by three weeks, per Inq policy, the nomination will be removed for inactivity. CC7567 (talk) 21:29, January 23, 2010 (UTC)