Talk: 206.21.130.63

Regarding your edits to Ferus Olin

As I do not wish to violate the three-revert rule, I would like to state my reasoning for reverting your edits to the article back to my previous version.

• Here is your first edit.
  • "A duel ensued, and as Vader evaded an attack from Olin, he choked him with the Force before ordering stormtroopers to imprison Antin and the Jedi."
    • I reverted this because: a) it wasn't a duel, all Ferus did was attack Vader twice, Vader stepped aside, and choked him. Their lightsabers didn't even contact each other, and b) it wasn't clear who did the force choking.

• I see now, although I didn't before, that you added "the Sith" in place of "he" to make this clear in your second edit. However, it still was not a duel, and so I reverted you again.

• And here is your third edit.
  • "A duel ensued, though as Vader evaded an attack from Olin, the Sith dwarfed him in power, and choked him with the Force... et cetera.
  • This was reverted because:

1. The duel thing.
2. It doesn't make sense— it essentially states 'even though there's a duel, Vader's avoiding an attack.' This is very unclear.
3. "dwarved him in power," although somewhat true, is unnecessary information and partially violates Wookieepedia:Neutral point of view.
4. Finally, I saw nothing wrong with the original wording, and I didn't see any improvement made in your edits.

• I apologize for my reversions, but there was no legitimate improvement made in any of your edits. Also, in the future, if you see a {{Inuse}} tag on an article, that means major edits are being made, and as a courtesy, you should refrain from making minor edits such as the ones you did to Ferus when the tag is up to avoid edit conflicts. Thank you, and have a nice day. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 23:26, 12 November 2007 (UTC)

Blanking your talk page

Please stop blanking your talk page as it is against policy. Talk pages act as records for the community. Stop, or you'll be blocked by me. Greyman^(Paratus) 03:59, 13 November 2007 (UTC)