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Hylo Visz is a former Featured article. Please see this article's entry on the Inquisitorius page for the reasons it was removed.

Article milestones
Date Process Result
May 20, 2009 Featured article nomination Success
July 1, 2009 Featured article by Dark Lord Trayus
March 4, 2012 Featured article review Kept
April 22, 2012 Featured article
August 6, 2018 Featured article review Removed
September 2, 2018 Former Featured article
Current status: Former Featured article
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Infobox

This is the first time I've added a page to the wiki so I likely forgot something. As is I know I used the wrong "info box" (think I used a "jedi" info box or something). Can someone help me out? 208.47.211.5 21:05, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Also, there are images available of Hylo from the two timelines released by BioWare. What's the process for getting an image set up for her? 208.47.211.5 21:06, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

If you have an image of her, you must register first to upload it. OLIOSTER Sith Emblem 21:09, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Okay, so now that I've rememberd my login info, how do I go about getting an image together? Also, what concerns are there regarding fair use? Can I just take a screen capture from the video? Fodigg 21:12, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Hey I have an actual login after all. I hadn't used it in so long I wasn't sure if I'd really made one or not. I think I screwed up the categories on this page too. Or at least it's not finding two of the three I included, having based this off of the Gnost-Dural entry. Fodigg 21:10, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Categories are almost always plural, such as smugglers, females, so on. OLIOSTER Sith Emblem 21:12, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Oh hey, there she is! Somebody beat me to it. :) Fodigg 21:14, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Yes it seems someone already uploaded an image. However, if you have anymore questions about image use, please see Wookieepedia:Guide to image use for more information. OLIOSTER Sith Emblem 21:16, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
    • Will do. Thank you for all the help. Fodigg 21:17, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Added the line: "The reprieve that this action brought to the Republic may have contributed to the decision by the Empire to attempt the Sacking of Coruscant." as this was implied by Gnost-Dural in the timeline. fo diggity | 22:09, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Changed "action" to "victory". A sentence someone else had added created a dangling modifier, making it look like her skipping out on her medal ceremony was what caused the sacking of coruscant. I loled.--fo diggity | 22:11, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
    • Eh, just re-ordered the sentences for clarity.--fo diggity | 22:15, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Redundant text

I like the expanded article by Darth Trayus, but each section reads as if it exists in a vacuum, leading to redundant fact listing and event description. I believe the article would benefit from the removal of redundant description. However, I am wary to jump in and do this as the article is up for "featured article" status. Anyone else have thoughts on this? // fodigg BlackRebelStarbird 15:42, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Made the changes I felt would improve the article. If anyone feels the need to revert back to an older version, be aware that some mundane grammar and punctuation issues were also fixed. // fodigg BlackRebelStarbird 16:39, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
    • Changes almost immediately reverted by Mauser for the article's FA candidacy status. Trayus, if you'd like to see the edits I made here's an easy link. // fodigg BlackRebelStarbird 16:59, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Featured article?

This article retells "Smuggler's Vanguard" twice over, it already links to it, what if someone wants to read that instead? It wouldn't need much done for it to actually qualify as a featured article, though. (- -) 02:12, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Smuggler's Vanguard

Is it possible that Smuggler's Vanguard actually takes place after the breaking of the Mandalorian blockade? Gnost-Dural says that she disappears after apparently double-crossing the Hutts, which may be what the story portrays. Also, in the timeline video, her ship is shown to have a small, cramped cockpit, unlike that of the stolen Vanguard. It's not solid evidence but it's something to consider. --DarthEinstein 17:29, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Alive?!

I guess this would be a spoiler but she is alive. If you complete the Gault companion quests in SWTOR Gault (the companion) finds her alive and in stasis on Belsavis.

Devmir 16:30, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cree Summer

I'll hold off adding it myself since this is a Featured Article and I don't have access to SWTOR to confirm it's stated in the game, but shouldn't Cree Summer being the voice of Hylo Visz be added to the behind the scenes section? Cevan IMPpress (talk) 23:25, December 3, 2016 (UTC)