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Silly Dan 22:39, 28 Apr 2005 (UTC)

Initial airing

When it first aired, there was a "parent's discretion" warning due to the violent nature of the film - and the distressing theme of the girl's family being killed. JAF1970 21:45, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

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page 155 has a reference to these films which will renew debate. 96.3.121.40 09:17, 29 February 2008 (UTC) Darth Apotheot

Bias catastrophe

Look at this paragraph:

"Tyrant's Test (1996). According to the official continuity of the Star Wars Expanded Universe, the character of Cindel Towani went on to appear in Michael P. Kube-McDowell's Star Wars book series, The Black Fleet Crisis Trilogy, specifically, in the third novel of the series, Tyrant's Test. In the novel, which is set over ten years after The Battle for Endor, Cindel is shown to have grown to be an intelligent and idealistic woman, who has become a reporter on Coruscant. During the Yevethan crisis, Cindel received the so-called Plat Mallar tapes from Admiral Drayson, and leaked the story of the only survivor of the Yevethan attack of Polneye. The report was meant to garner sympathy among the people of the New Republic and the Senate. It worked. Although the Expanded Universe claims Cindel decided to join the New Republic and go into journalism after witnessing the Battle of Endor, some fans speculate the Battle of Endor must've been over before she and her family crashed (see Alleged Continuity Issues above).

Emphasis added for clarification. This entire paragraph is a mess, but especially the parts I've pointed it. It's full to the brim with dramatic presentation, unprofessional grammar, an unnatural amount of commas, and weasel words. I don't even know where to begin fixing it, so I'm just posting this here if someone else who knows what they're doing would like to revise it. 68.191.152.168 09:36, November 21, 2011 (UTC)