unclear phrasing
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The end of the Colicoid#Biology and appearance section says, The Old Republic soon stopped sending representatives, not any Jedi Knights, to silence the protections of others for the excesses of the Colicoids. Is it supposed to say not even Jedi Knights? What does to silence the protections of others for the excesses of the Colicoids mean?
The Colicoid#History section begins with, After much debate, especially about costs, the proposal was approved. What proposal?
--173.67.42.107 07:19, 1 March 2024 (UTC)