It starts good but it falls into the "rigid Jedi code" and "ossified" Jedi Order, and, of course, the "Grey Jedi" makes an appearance.

It's quite interesting to see how these fans start to talk about actual Star Wars then, without noticing it, ending up talking about the fan-creed. For example, Obi-Wan tells Qui-Gon: "But Master Yoda said, I should be mindful of the future." To which he replies, "But not at the expense of the moment." The "conclusion," Yoda is more focused on the future and Qui-Gon is more focused on the present, cannot be derived from Lucas' story. It comes from the desire to see Qui-Gon as engaged and Yoda as distant.

It also fails to make clear distinctions between Lucas' story, Legends' story and Disney's story, and it makes the claim, Luke is cynical about the Jedi Order in Episode VIII "due to the fact that the rigid Jedi Code led his father to fall to the Dark Side." I have no recollection of this ever being stated or even implied in The Last Jedi.

All in all, it manages to explain most things about the Jedi and the Sith correctly, but insists on many things that are just the fan-creed and cannot be derived from the actual story.